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7/29/2013 c1 26asimbelmyne
Wow. Holy crap. I could feel tears threatening to spill out of my eyes as I read this. Just... wow. You did a fantastic job writing this one shot. Everything was SO completely RAW and powerful. I've never read anything as heartbreaking as this before. It was beautiful to indulge on, despite the sincere amount of grief and sadness that engulfed my mind while reading this. Great job, you truly are a awesome writer! :)
5/15/2011 c1 10mitsuishi
Wonderful story, really awakens emotions thanks to your style. I played the song you mention at the beginning and I must admit that together with the story they make a perfect couple, complimenting each other. Very nice descriptions, but if one thing could bother me in this fic is a bit os OOCness both in Ichigo and Rukia. They both seem to calm for their explosive tempers. Anyway, it is beautiful story, definitely one of the best I've read here. :)
7/27/2009 c1 5SkoRn3d
I don't like it *sits in corner with a shaking bottom lip*

I mean, I love the way you write - it's beautiful, but for all it's implications ... I can't bring myself to like it. And your "Author's Note" does bare the question - what IF Ichigo dies, surely Kubo-san would find a way to make them meet again. Surely?

Anyway, back to the implications - I just can't bring myself to believe that there's even the slightest posibility that Ichigo could be defeated. Not even including the fact that a cowardly, unjustifiably idiotic twat was the cause of his death but merely the fact that he could die at all. It kinda weirds me out. That aside -and as I said before- you have a wonderful writing style, it's expressive and delicate but not so that you'd potray someone like Ichigo in the wrong light.

And though I don't like the fact that he actually died -cause really? What die-hard Bleach fan would like THAT?- I rather did enjoy the first 2 thirds of this story. You made it seem like he'd been fixing her from day one and she only gets it completely when she's about to be ripped anew.

Okay, I think that's enough from me ne? But! In case I didn't make myself completely clear, I did love this fic - for the most part :o) and I hope that's enough ...

Ja ne
11/28/2008 c1 ChEsE
omg u made me cry

~sniff sniff~

that was so beautiful

but hopefully that doesnt happen

anyways KEEP WRITING! ur really good!

- ChEsE
9/15/2008 c1 4soulterror
wow sad but very well done ^_^
4/5/2008 c1 Shirogane Naoto
Wow ! Great Discription !

It's like you could imagine or mabye feel it happening right here , right now ~!

Keep up the good work!
2/17/2008 c1 14Lapse in Judgment
Wow, this is so much better than the car crash songfic that I wrote. Good job.
1/18/2008 c1 VintageBeautyx
How depressing, but I still like it. Haha.

- SerenityxAngel.
11/9/2007 c1 8CharmingMurderess
bam. i'm so heart-broken. ouch. it's s nice story though. just hate the ending. ehe!
8/24/2007 c1 Bri
I'm going to go cry now.
7/4/2007 c1 21Katseester
That was absolutely beautiful! It was an innocent play between two people, when suddenly the unthinkable happens. I still can't belive he would die though. The thought makes me want to cry! It was an amazing oneshot and I hope you continue to write!

Tenfold Defiance
7/3/2007 c1 9BleedingSaro
OMG, I'm seriously crying right now. While I was reading, I was thinking. It's so horrible that things like these happen. And you can never understand the pain that Rukia felt seeing that unless you have actually seen it yourself. It's hard, when you think about it. How horrible it must be. There are those out there who have seen loved ones die before their eyes, and their pain is just, unbelievable.

I could feel Rukia's pain throughout this story. Great descriptions. You're an amazing writer.
7/1/2007 c1 2Tyan
*sniffs*

Aw, that was so sad! Beautiful discriptions, very nice one-shot.
6/28/2007 c1 xXxInuLoverxXx
that was so cool i loved the part where you said the world doesnt stop for anyone its just keeps on going
6/26/2007 c1 2Jacky-The-Ripper
Wonderful description, skillfully played out.

One question... Why is it only the driver and Rukia noticed a bloody mass in the middle of the street? I mean really, someone would've saw it and called 911! (Or whatever it is in Japan.)

Other then that it was simply beautiful.
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