
9/20/2009 c1 James Birdsong
Good. Nice.
Good. Nice.
8/30/2007 c1 Ominae
Good read there. Nice angst and dark on the story.
Good read there. Nice angst and dark on the story.
6/19/2007 c1
26Raihu
Really nice pacing and writing here, and the atmosphere is JUST. Augh. Too much, and yet just enough.
The dark melancholy of the prose makes this story both overwhelmingly sad and completely intoxicating at once. You've struck the perfect balance there, and the result is one really enjoyable read.

Really nice pacing and writing here, and the atmosphere is JUST. Augh. Too much, and yet just enough.
The dark melancholy of the prose makes this story both overwhelmingly sad and completely intoxicating at once. You've struck the perfect balance there, and the result is one really enjoyable read.