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for Keeping Her Word

6/19/2007 c1 1P-Money
I kinda like paying off the shovel-to-the-head disclaimer, but Riley's character was a bit unrealistic in terms of the words u gave him to use. He wouldn't be so directly hurtful, I think he'd only do so if he were really upset, but despite that smll lapse in character continuity, it was shocking enough that I smiled by the end, and it was a pretty good read...sounded quite like a scene from the show, so good on you!

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