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6/6/2016 c1 Brooke
That sounds exactly like something Willy would do. I immediately thought of candy worms when he said that he used them as bait. This is such a cure story. I love the image of Charlie acting like a groundhog. Lol.
5/8/2008 c1 Rendezvous Haver
It's so cute. This was creativity in cornucopia. Creativity I admire, curiosity I admire! My own little rhyme of the time. Hey! I'm a poet it and I didn't even know it. I hope you like this review. This story isn't a Mary Sue!
10/20/2007 c1 11Pokey1984
Thank you for the wonderful ficlet. It really captured the spirit of the movie. More importantly, is made me laugh when I sorely needed to.

Sincerest thanks, -Pokey1984
7/30/2007 c1 18Nienna Telrunya
Hee, hee, hee. Is so very, very amused. :D
6/25/2007 c1 7fxkoala
This ficlet is too much fun for words! The very idea of Willy with his pants legs and sleeves rolled up and a red licorice "straw" hat on his head is a wonderfully whimsical picture. So how much chocolate did Charlie catch?

Thank you very much for sharing your humorous glimpse inside the Factory!
6/20/2007 c1 5Orchisse
AWW. That's so incredibly cute.

"What kind of bait?"

"Worms!"

HA HA! Good job!
6/20/2007 c1 Yva J
That was a great ficlet. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and could really see this happening in the Chocolate Room. I could even hear Willy saying 'ew' in my mind when he was talking about the worms.

Loved it!

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