for Death, and After That10/12/2015 c10 tacaloking
i was a little resistant when i started this story because it just sounded like something that could never exist in kim possible and very rarely when thats true does the story turn out good but i have to say everything is expressed flawlessly you did a great job showing what everyones going though and even whats going on i can almost picture whats going on
i was a little resistant when i started this story because it just sounded like something that could never exist in kim possible and very rarely when thats true does the story turn out good but i have to say everything is expressed flawlessly you did a great job showing what everyones going though and even whats going on i can almost picture whats going on
10/1/2015 c18 Amateraszu
nice twist :)
looking very much forward to part 2 and 3
keep up the good work
nice twist :)
looking very much forward to part 2 and 3
keep up the good work
12/20/2014 c18 
1Hewhoislost
Great fic, I read it far to fast. I'm happy to read this is a part one to a trilogy, its a great world you have crafted.
1HewhoislostGreat fic, I read it far to fast. I'm happy to read this is a part one to a trilogy, its a great world you have crafted.
12/14/2014 c10 Hewhoislost
You have made me reevaluate Drakken, the excerpts from his journal are thought provoking. On a side note reading this fic finally got me watch Gungrave, its helping me understand some of the "Science".
You have made me reevaluate Drakken, the excerpts from his journal are thought provoking. On a side note reading this fic finally got me watch Gungrave, its helping me understand some of the "Science".
7/25/2014 c18 theatrelesbian
I'm so conflicted is this a kigo story ooor? Lol
I was waiting for Kim to kiss her haha
Great story though n3n
Totally worth reading!
I'm so conflicted is this a kigo story ooor? Lol
I was waiting for Kim to kiss her haha
Great story though n3n
Totally worth reading!
6/30/2013 c18 3ArielFetters
Great story, very original and you take the characters in some unique directions. However one thing I've noticed in your stories is a lot of temporal jumping and it gets very jarring very fast. If I can suggest, do flashbacks in bigger chunks, one big chunk if at all possible.
3ArielFettersGreat story, very original and you take the characters in some unique directions. However one thing I've noticed in your stories is a lot of temporal jumping and it gets very jarring very fast. If I can suggest, do flashbacks in bigger chunks, one big chunk if at all possible.
3/28/2013 c18 1SirRealism
Good story. I especially appreciated the way Kim and Shego's fondness for one another was developed.
1SirRealismGood story. I especially appreciated the way Kim and Shego's fondness for one another was developed.
11/1/2012 c2 Guest
"dieing" :D lol wtf
"dieing" :D lol wtf
4/23/2011 c18 Guest
Awesome story. I don't know if you are still
writing, but, I would love to read the sequels.
Awesome story. I don't know if you are still
writing, but, I would love to read the sequels.
4/23/2011 c18 Guest
Awesome story. I don't know if you still
Awesome story. I don't know if you still
10/17/2009 c18 khakfsdukgd
Dude I read this fic and it was frigging nuts. In a good way. Normally I hate super grimdark fics that kill a bunch of the characters but you handled stuff here pretty well I think. Would've liked more Ron action though, since he kind of dropped off the face of the fic a while back. Regardless, keep up your writing! It's mondo cherry
Dude I read this fic and it was frigging nuts. In a good way. Normally I hate super grimdark fics that kill a bunch of the characters but you handled stuff here pretty well I think. Would've liked more Ron action though, since he kind of dropped off the face of the fic a while back. Regardless, keep up your writing! It's mondo cherry