for The Sick Sword7/12/2021 c1 2077
this fic was quite rough, but I enjoyed the premise. The author did a good job of communicating emotions in this story, even if the writing was SUPER choppy
this fic was quite rough, but I enjoyed the premise. The author did a good job of communicating emotions in this story, even if the writing was SUPER choppy
5/24/2012 c1 
6Ann E. Casap
Nice, fluffy story. It's well descripted, vivid, and...well cute. I like the idea of the master taking care of the servant. I did spot a few grammatical errors though. Haha dame desu nee! The description of the setting and background helps bring out the story, as well as the story itself. Nice work.
Wakarimashite Wakarimashita
Oh yeah, nice title too. How fitting.
-Ann
6Ann E. CasapNice, fluffy story. It's well descripted, vivid, and...well cute. I like the idea of the master taking care of the servant. I did spot a few grammatical errors though. Haha dame desu nee! The description of the setting and background helps bring out the story, as well as the story itself. Nice work.
Wakarimashite Wakarimashita
Oh yeah, nice title too. How fitting.
-Ann
3/17/2010 c1 James Birdsong
Great job.
Great job.
6/18/2008 c1 unborncross
the story was nice but it also made me imagine that it has another chapter... ^_^
hheehehehe
the story was nice but it also made me imagine that it has another chapter... ^_^
hheehehehe
7/8/2007 c1 Ayachan107
OMG...That was so cute! Never thoughted that the Servants can actually sick...Nice fic...
OMG...That was so cute! Never thoughted that the Servants can actually sick...Nice fic...
6/28/2007 c1 boomer sooner
Good start to the story! Except... How can Saber see a giant moon if it is raining in Fuyuki City at the same time?
Good start to the story! Except... How can Saber see a giant moon if it is raining in Fuyuki City at the same time?
6/22/2007 c1 livi510
WO! =D FWUFF! =D Great job with the pairing...even though I don't know the song...^^"
~livi510~
WO! =D FWUFF! =D Great job with the pairing...even though I don't know the song...^^"
~livi510~
6/22/2007 c1 25Olive'sBadDreams
x3 KAWAII DESU, NE?
Gomen nasai, I'm somewhat 'stealing' your idea of a sickness and fever for bonding for 'Black.' Ulquiorra's gonna take care of R'mekia because she's sick. x3
25Olive'sBadDreamsx3 KAWAII DESU, NE?
Gomen nasai, I'm somewhat 'stealing' your idea of a sickness and fever for bonding for 'Black.' Ulquiorra's gonna take care of R'mekia because she's sick. x3