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10/29/2012 c5 WTH is this
Whoever told you that you could write must have been intoxicated at the time.

Seriously, what was going through your head when you decided to post this? It’s dreadful. find it a terrible waste of space,

Do you take some kind of sick, twisted pleasure in mangling the English language?

Keep the canon characters in character. You using established characters who are completely OOC

And yes, I am insulting the rubbish you chose to put on display for all the world to see and admire. Deal with it in a mature way, please. delete this.
9/29/2012 c4 Guest
i bet inuyasha will kill koga and ignore kagome
9/29/2012 c5 ninja
yes it is cheesy
9/29/2012 c2 ninja
i love this
4/27/2012 c5 3CharmingDuckDevil
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease continue this! I love it! AND THAT CLIFFHANGER IS KILLING ME! XD
8/2/2010 c5 1AwkwardIdeasLeadToThis
ok maybe it was koga! don't blame me i havent watched in a while!
8/2/2010 c3 AwkwardIdeasLeadToThis
im pretty sure the wolf kids name was kota... no... wait... yea... Kota... yea i think so ya know...
3/15/2008 c5 4Rumoi
aw can you continue?

'cause that's really good.

it's so sad... poor kagome and inuyasha
9/12/2007 c5 LetsKeepDreaming
my god woman! another frikkin cliffhanger! just hurry up and update! pwease? :3
8/14/2007 c5 4Alex-Inu
omg i want more please update as soon as u can

please and thank u

alex inu
7/17/2007 c3 chyeaa its lizaaah
update soon!
7/2/2007 c3 9Inu's Hanyo
ok im hooked i love it so far! please continue i want to know what happens! your a great writer! the only thing is that i dont think inuyasha would say fuck that often...
6/30/2007 c3 31xiDOREyoux and CrimsonTears
aw, I like. update soon!^^ch3
6/23/2007 c2 1PrismDream
update!
6/22/2007 c2 31xiDOREyoux and CrimsonTears
aw, sad. did kagome see? ch.2

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