
9/25/2007 c1
112geekmama
LOL! Very cute and sexy. You have a nice way with words, and very good pacing. I've rarely liked a W/E story more!
~ Geek Mama ~

LOL! Very cute and sexy. You have a nice way with words, and very good pacing. I've rarely liked a W/E story more!
~ Geek Mama ~
6/24/2007 c1
13acacia59601
This story was great! The only thing I can offer for critique is to check the title, it might be better if it was Swordplays... As it is, it's hard to tell if you just forgot to add a space, if it was a capitalization error or if you meant it that way.

This story was great! The only thing I can offer for critique is to check the title, it might be better if it was Swordplays... As it is, it's hard to tell if you just forgot to add a space, if it was a capitalization error or if you meant it that way.