for My Final Goodbye10/4/2007 c7 
8RingWarriorAzec2113
I love that idea! I love the fact that Rose lives on in Rose!
Please update soon.
8RingWarriorAzec2113I love that idea! I love the fact that Rose lives on in Rose!
Please update soon.
8/19/2007 c7 166Veritas Found
You would think that, after the initial ending, this would just sort of weaken it, but it really doesn't. S'a great way to close it off - and you gotta love how he asked her twice. That's just awesome. =)
166Veritas FoundYou would think that, after the initial ending, this would just sort of weaken it, but it really doesn't. S'a great way to close it off - and you gotta love how he asked her twice. That's just awesome. =)
8/18/2007 c6 Cyber.Green.Converse
Amazing, just amazing. The story you wrote made me cry. Thats how good at writing you are.
Amazing, just amazing. The story you wrote made me cry. Thats how good at writing you are.
8/16/2007 c6 4Greyaddict
omg this whole thing is absoloutely beautiful! you had me crying! well done i loved it!
4Greyaddictomg this whole thing is absoloutely beautiful! you had me crying! well done i loved it!
8/15/2007 c6 166Veritas Found
I want to hate that ending, but there's no possible way I could. Absolutely beautiful. (And I'm bawling again. "Angst" in the summary needs to be replaced with "Grab your tissues NOW." ;P)
166Veritas FoundI want to hate that ending, but there's no possible way I could. Absolutely beautiful. (And I'm bawling again. "Angst" in the summary needs to be replaced with "Grab your tissues NOW." ;P)
8/15/2007 c5 Veritas Found
Ok, the rest have had me dang near close to tears, but this one got me flat-out bawlin'. Absolutely beautiful.
Ok, the rest have had me dang near close to tears, but this one got me flat-out bawlin'. Absolutely beautiful.
8/15/2007 c4 Veritas Found
Really? I thought it was great. So many people just turn Martha into this bitter, jealous person whenever Rose comes into play that it makes you wonder how many people really get her character that well. Personally, I think she might be a smidge jealous (since she's crushing on the Doc), but I see it more like this; jealous, yes, but she'd care about and respect Rose, too. Anyways, another great chap.
Really? I thought it was great. So many people just turn Martha into this bitter, jealous person whenever Rose comes into play that it makes you wonder how many people really get her character that well. Personally, I think she might be a smidge jealous (since she's crushing on the Doc), but I see it more like this; jealous, yes, but she'd care about and respect Rose, too. Anyways, another great chap.
8/15/2007 c3 Veritas Found
"She could've had it all.
Instead she has us."
Chapter clicher, right there. Mickey's always been one of my favorites, and I love how you got him here. Excellent work.
"She could've had it all.
Instead she has us."
Chapter clicher, right there. Mickey's always been one of my favorites, and I love how you got him here. Excellent work.
8/15/2007 c2 Veritas Found
I actually got a few lines into this thinking it was the Doctor's chap. ^^'` I love it, though; once again you've portrayed the emotion perfectly (and I'm so glad I grabbed my tissue box this time), and Jack just shines in this. Great job.
I actually got a few lines into this thinking it was the Doctor's chap. ^^'` I love it, though; once again you've portrayed the emotion perfectly (and I'm so glad I grabbed my tissue box this time), and Jack just shines in this. Great job.
8/14/2007 c1 Veritas Found
This was really, really good, and I hope you decide to continue it. You captured the emotion perfectly, and the whole time I just wanted to hug her and go "Yeah, but she's still alive! It's ok!". Great work here. =)
This was really, really good, and I hope you decide to continue it. You captured the emotion perfectly, and the whole time I just wanted to hug her and go "Yeah, but she's still alive! It's ok!". Great work here. =)