for I Need You7/19/2007 c1 
9Eat a Taco
SR~
Italics...made me dizzy. But that's beyond the oint. Plus, it's my fault I don't wear my glasses when I should. (all the time) So forget that part.
Your dialogue got stronger as you went on, although some of it was a little rocky. And the grammar mistake "I can't believe THEIR gone," made me twitch. because i had to suffer a year or "Grammar Prep" during my free periods because, god forbid, i said that it would be OKAY at the beginning of the year. but now i am a grammar queen, so i guess i should appreciate it.
very cute though, i like Peeves' comment. he is love.
9Eat a TacoSR~
Italics...made me dizzy. But that's beyond the oint. Plus, it's my fault I don't wear my glasses when I should. (all the time) So forget that part.
Your dialogue got stronger as you went on, although some of it was a little rocky. And the grammar mistake "I can't believe THEIR gone," made me twitch. because i had to suffer a year or "Grammar Prep" during my free periods because, god forbid, i said that it would be OKAY at the beginning of the year. but now i am a grammar queen, so i guess i should appreciate it.
very cute though, i like Peeves' comment. he is love.