for Sleeping With Friend and Foe4/2/2018 c5 Taylor
Honestly, I wouldn’t have thought that Ron and Harry were gay!
Honestly, I wouldn’t have thought that Ron and Harry were gay!
4/2/2018 c4 Taylor
SNAPE IS WAY TO OLD FOR HERMIONE! AND HARRY’S WITH GINNY!
SNAPE IS WAY TO OLD FOR HERMIONE! AND HARRY’S WITH GINNY!
3/23/2018 c35 Guest
OMGGGGGGGGGG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE I'M ADDICTED
OMGGGGGGGGGG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE I'M ADDICTED
2/6/2018 c1 
3CorruptedLily
I like the idea of the story but you need more practice with trying to write erotica. It's too fast and there's no real plot.
You have ease in to the story.
Details in a erotic fan fiction are foreplay and just as important in a story as it is during sex.
I this could turn into a lovely story but I'm afraid to read the rest because it's not well thought out...
3CorruptedLilyI like the idea of the story but you need more practice with trying to write erotica. It's too fast and there's no real plot.
You have ease in to the story.
Details in a erotic fan fiction are foreplay and just as important in a story as it is during sex.
I this could turn into a lovely story but I'm afraid to read the rest because it's not well thought out...
12/8/2017 c35 Erikaahhh
Are you going to continue this? I feel as if there's I my a few chapters left
Are you going to continue this? I feel as if there's I my a few chapters left
7/3/2016 c1 Guest
Well... a nympho Hermione is fine and good... but with Draco, Zabini and Harry at the same time? Disgusting and way too out of character for all of them.
Well... a nympho Hermione is fine and good... but with Draco, Zabini and Harry at the same time? Disgusting and way too out of character for all of them.
6/6/2016 c35 10Doristarazona
Hola! Hello! How are you? First of all, I have to say, I love this fic, I really love it. When I read the first 8 chapters, I was in the Middle of the heat, because those were so hot that I felt on fire Hahaha.
Now after the 8th, I felt every emotion, every feeling that Hermione had, and I am in love of the story. I love Severus, and I'm feeling so sad for him. At least he lived the kind of love of Hermione. But I love Draco too, he has recovered of that Evil time and he is doing everything Bittersweet for Hermione and the baby. I really love him. I hope you can complete this fic, it seems that you can do it with a few chapters. Please try to give us the end of the battle.
Thank you so much for the story.
By the way, I am from Venezuela, so please forgive my english, I am still learning.
Thanks for all.
XOXO
Doris
10DoristarazonaHola! Hello! How are you? First of all, I have to say, I love this fic, I really love it. When I read the first 8 chapters, I was in the Middle of the heat, because those were so hot that I felt on fire Hahaha.
Now after the 8th, I felt every emotion, every feeling that Hermione had, and I am in love of the story. I love Severus, and I'm feeling so sad for him. At least he lived the kind of love of Hermione. But I love Draco too, he has recovered of that Evil time and he is doing everything Bittersweet for Hermione and the baby. I really love him. I hope you can complete this fic, it seems that you can do it with a few chapters. Please try to give us the end of the battle.
Thank you so much for the story.
By the way, I am from Venezuela, so please forgive my english, I am still learning.
Thanks for all.
XOXO
Doris
11/1/2015 c35 Guest
love this storyline... please update! loving it!
love this storyline... please update! loving it!
4/24/2015 c1 Wow
Thank you for that. I needed that laugh.
Thank you for that. I needed that laugh.
7/16/2014 c34 ilovefireyredheads
ahhh! i can't wait to read more! your story has really blossomed and matured in how your characters have developed and plot! keep it up!
ahhh! i can't wait to read more! your story has really blossomed and matured in how your characters have developed and plot! keep it up!
10/6/2013 c12 9Lady Vyxen
While you 've changed direction of the story and it's no longer plotless I don't think that Voldemort is in character. He's too nice. The rest of the chapter is very good anyway :)
9Lady VyxenWhile you 've changed direction of the story and it's no longer plotless I don't think that Voldemort is in character. He's too nice. The rest of the chapter is very good anyway :)
10/5/2013 c11 Lady Vyxen
I like her calling Draco ferret. It's great. And the drama...Lucius. He won't be happy with Draco's new relationship
I like her calling Draco ferret. It's great. And the drama...Lucius. He won't be happy with Draco's new relationship