for Erik's Story9/29/2012 c4 Matt
It's Eric not Erik you dumbbell.
It's Eric not Erik you dumbbell.
1/6/2008 c4 FindingMyStory2020
Hey that was very realistic
it was really good and i would like to read soe more of your stories if you have wrote any
thankz
from
1995 naya 1995
Hey that was very realistic
it was really good and i would like to read soe more of your stories if you have wrote any
thankz
from
1995 naya 1995
9/17/2007 c4 
6Goonie-Gal
SCORE! TOUCHDOWN! smooth. Absolutely perfect! I like it. THough the end kind of moved fast... but i like how you thought of Eric times alone on the island. Good imagination. Wonderful work. Keep it up!
6Goonie-GalSCORE! TOUCHDOWN! smooth. Absolutely perfect! I like it. THough the end kind of moved fast... but i like how you thought of Eric times alone on the island. Good imagination. Wonderful work. Keep it up!
9/17/2007 c3 Goonie-Gal
Liked the first chappy, adored the second, fell in love with the third... gee wonder if i'll like the forth? LOL love it all!
Liked the first chappy, adored the second, fell in love with the third... gee wonder if i'll like the forth? LOL love it all!
9/17/2007 c2 Goonie-Gal
Oh yeah baby beautiful! Love it all! Good work! although i have to say... For eric to keep wondering back and forth seems pretty brave... then again... Eric is such a wiz bomb. He's so cool! Love that you keep his character... keep it up!
Oh yeah baby beautiful! Love it all! Good work! although i have to say... For eric to keep wondering back and forth seems pretty brave... then again... Eric is such a wiz bomb. He's so cool! Love that you keep his character... keep it up!
9/17/2007 c1 Goonie-Gal
Ok... let me tell you somthing... i just read the first chappy... and holy cow... good details and description! it's awsome! I like it a lot! One think you forgot though... when eric turned the camera off. Maybe someone already told ya... or you perposly did it. DOn't know and don't care casue it's still a great first chappy! A little more on surroundings though, but other then that... fantastic!
Ok... let me tell you somthing... i just read the first chappy... and holy cow... good details and description! it's awsome! I like it a lot! One think you forgot though... when eric turned the camera off. Maybe someone already told ya... or you perposly did it. DOn't know and don't care casue it's still a great first chappy! A little more on surroundings though, but other then that... fantastic!
9/12/2007 c4 12SouthernStyle
You captured the essence of the Jurassic Park imagery, and your style of writing is great.
12SouthernStyleYou captured the essence of the Jurassic Park imagery, and your style of writing is great.