for Red Fury6/2/2009 c1 
9Amrun
I really enjoyed this. Doing Ben's perspective is an intriguing idea in itself, and I think you handled it well. The last line is the best and most surprising.
9AmrunI really enjoyed this. Doing Ben's perspective is an intriguing idea in itself, and I think you handled it well. The last line is the best and most surprising.
8/1/2008 c1 79KrisEleven
Another amazing fic. You're summaries are very well written, but vague. I'd expected this to be about Liam and Alanna, for some reason.
I really enjoyed this fic. I'm not sure if you thought about it, but the fact that he doesn't think about the people he's being put to death for is a neat look into his psych. I do think you should have had a little paragraph about his 'art' and his mother, though. The last line was absolutley amazing.
The only thing I can say to improve is the line you have in the summary. In the actual fic it should be 'He'd (or 'he had')always...', not 'He always'.
KrisEleven~
79KrisElevenAnother amazing fic. You're summaries are very well written, but vague. I'd expected this to be about Liam and Alanna, for some reason.
I really enjoyed this fic. I'm not sure if you thought about it, but the fact that he doesn't think about the people he's being put to death for is a neat look into his psych. I do think you should have had a little paragraph about his 'art' and his mother, though. The last line was absolutley amazing.
The only thing I can say to improve is the line you have in the summary. In the actual fic it should be 'He'd (or 'he had')always...', not 'He always'.
KrisEleven~
6/23/2008 c1 Merkaba7734
Ohh... I like it a lot. This is from a different story than usual and a different POV.
Ohh... I like it a lot. This is from a different story than usual and a different POV.
8/11/2007 c1 ZeroJager101
Hey Freya, it's me Cobi, the 3rd former from Karaoke High? Lol. Cool story! You captured his character really well. Ben always freaked me out...
Hey Freya, it's me Cobi, the 3rd former from Karaoke High? Lol. Cool story! You captured his character really well. Ben always freaked me out...