for Nothing8/19/2008 c5 
1Sayoko-chan09
hmm i like it...i feel sorry for soubi though...maybe sometime you might put in a chapter what happened to soubi..^-^ but thats all up to you. hopefully you should update soon.
1Sayoko-chan09hmm i like it...i feel sorry for soubi though...maybe sometime you might put in a chapter what happened to soubi..^-^ but thats all up to you. hopefully you should update soon.
3/19/2008 c5 A Single Fragile Rose
AWESOME...I REALLY LIKED IT.
SUPER...LOL
WELL, I HOPE YOU WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER.
GOOD LUCK.
OH, I READ THAT YOU WERE SAVING MONEY TO GO TO JAPAN, YOU CAN DO THE ''FORIEGN EXCHANGE STUDENT''AND...HEY IM SORRY BUT I GOTTA GO PLEASE WRITE BACK MAYBE I COULD HELP YOU?
WOW, THIS IS WEIRD BUT GOOD LUCK WRITING YOUR NEXT CHAPTER.
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AWESOME...I REALLY LIKED IT.
SUPER...LOL
WELL, I HOPE YOU WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER.
GOOD LUCK.
OH, I READ THAT YOU WERE SAVING MONEY TO GO TO JAPAN, YOU CAN DO THE ''FORIEGN EXCHANGE STUDENT''AND...HEY IM SORRY BUT I GOTTA GO PLEASE WRITE BACK MAYBE I COULD HELP YOU?
WOW, THIS IS WEIRD BUT GOOD LUCK WRITING YOUR NEXT CHAPTER.
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3/7/2008 c5 35Kyla45
wow. what can I say? I devoured all five chapters; this is brilliant. Beautiful. I'm really loving it. It's a very moving piece of written words. The emotion is not depicted as rudely or plainly as it's so often done elsewhere. This is really brilliant. I'll be waiting for more.
35Kyla45wow. what can I say? I devoured all five chapters; this is brilliant. Beautiful. I'm really loving it. It's a very moving piece of written words. The emotion is not depicted as rudely or plainly as it's so often done elsewhere. This is really brilliant. I'll be waiting for more.
10/10/2007 c4 304 MACaBRE
Hi!
First off, I can't understand you people who are complanining about the length of the chapters. The story's food just like this, no need to improve.
I like very much the way the story's going, you're also a good writer and I hope you'll continue this soon :)
Hi!
First off, I can't understand you people who are complanining about the length of the chapters. The story's food just like this, no need to improve.
I like very much the way the story's going, you're also a good writer and I hope you'll continue this soon :)
8/10/2007 c3 Sonya4ever
It;s confusinf, but good. Soubi died and he ran out of his house away from his mom and net that dude and now he is trying to get an aprament.I think that's what going on anyway.Fisrt must I ask..Does Soubi really die? And second I must say..THE FIRST ONE MADE ME WANT TO CRY..and that's been hapenign alot since I got on here last night and I never cry like that because of books and stuff that takes forever to read(It's like a differnet case of ADD...)
It;s confusinf, but good. Soubi died and he ran out of his house away from his mom and net that dude and now he is trying to get an aprament.I think that's what going on anyway.Fisrt must I ask..Does Soubi really die? And second I must say..THE FIRST ONE MADE ME WANT TO CRY..and that's been hapenign alot since I got on here last night and I never cry like that because of books and stuff that takes forever to read(It's like a differnet case of ADD...)
8/6/2007 c3 7I-Plead-Obsession
Dear lord... this is quite pitiful.
Your writing is good, but your length is idiotically short. Your 'chapters' can't even be called a chapter. Technically these are a bunch of short drabbles that are linked together.
Please, do not call this a fanfiction. It's a disgrace. This 'story' is merely drabbles. Do not call it a story let alone a decent fanfiction.
Your writing is good, but your chapter length leaves me feeling otherwise.
Kou-Shuurei.
Ps: the reason why i'm on ch.3 is because I had some insane hope that your chapters would get longer. I'm sorry, but I guess I was wrong. Keep up the good writing... just make it a hell of a lot longer.
7I-Plead-ObsessionDear lord... this is quite pitiful.
Your writing is good, but your length is idiotically short. Your 'chapters' can't even be called a chapter. Technically these are a bunch of short drabbles that are linked together.
Please, do not call this a fanfiction. It's a disgrace. This 'story' is merely drabbles. Do not call it a story let alone a decent fanfiction.
Your writing is good, but your chapter length leaves me feeling otherwise.
Kou-Shuurei.
Ps: the reason why i'm on ch.3 is because I had some insane hope that your chapters would get longer. I'm sorry, but I guess I was wrong. Keep up the good writing... just make it a hell of a lot longer.
8/1/2007 c6 Lovelessdarkness
I love it. Please keep writing.
I love it. Please keep writing.
7/3/2007 c2 3XIXDeadGirlXIX
This chapter was very good. you really expressed Ritsuka's character. one part thats got me highly interested is the
"A book slammed onto my desk and my instant reaction was to jump about two feet into the air at the sudden sound. It was a textbook. I looked up to see who made said action but I only saw an empty classroom." the reason why i'm so interested in this is it got me wondering "is Soubi's spirit haunting Ritsuka?" I really want to know! Damnit I love strories like this! Update soon PLEASE!
3XIXDeadGirlXIXThis chapter was very good. you really expressed Ritsuka's character. one part thats got me highly interested is the
"A book slammed onto my desk and my instant reaction was to jump about two feet into the air at the sudden sound. It was a textbook. I looked up to see who made said action but I only saw an empty classroom." the reason why i'm so interested in this is it got me wondering "is Soubi's spirit haunting Ritsuka?" I really want to know! Damnit I love strories like this! Update soon PLEASE!
7/3/2007 c1 3XIXDeadGirlXIX
okay, you've got me hooked! please wright more and if you could, in longer chapters. Its awesum and I'm dying to know how Soubi died. oh and nice job on killing him, most people don't kill him in thare fics because they don't have the heart to.
but I'm glad that you did its a nice change. (sorry I'm very morbid and I'm killing Soubi in about two or three of my fics aswell.) Great job,keep up the good work! ^_^
3XIXDeadGirlXIXokay, you've got me hooked! please wright more and if you could, in longer chapters. Its awesum and I'm dying to know how Soubi died. oh and nice job on killing him, most people don't kill him in thare fics because they don't have the heart to.
but I'm glad that you did its a nice change. (sorry I'm very morbid and I'm killing Soubi in about two or three of my fics aswell.) Great job,keep up the good work! ^_^