
11/15/2012 c1
7FoamBanana
I did like this fanfiction. I had another ending in mind, but this ending really seemed to be the happiest one. I do hope that you continue your work here on .

I did like this fanfiction. I had another ending in mind, but this ending really seemed to be the happiest one. I do hope that you continue your work here on .
7/11/2010 c1
3Not Your Girl 555
Do not criticize yourself, the story is amazing. It made my eyes water. Seriously. Glad that it had a happy ending, or something close. :)

Do not criticize yourself, the story is amazing. It made my eyes water. Seriously. Glad that it had a happy ending, or something close. :)
11/16/2009 c1
3Melted Flames
I loved that! It was depressing, but it had a happy ending, and it was realistic, which is the most important factor. :)

I loved that! It was depressing, but it had a happy ending, and it was realistic, which is the most important factor. :)
6/13/2009 c1
27refracted
That was very bittersweet.
No matter how many times I read stories alike this, I always find them amazing. The way you wrote it made it very angst, yet very sweet. Nearly shed a tear or so.
Loved it.

That was very bittersweet.
No matter how many times I read stories alike this, I always find them amazing. The way you wrote it made it very angst, yet very sweet. Nearly shed a tear or so.
Loved it.
11/21/2008 c1 Guest
This is really good. Although the ending seemed rushed.
This is really good. Although the ending seemed rushed.
7/6/2008 c1 PawsCahn
:D it wasnt horrible, it was accually very good. im glad you wrote this. keep up the good work
:D it wasnt horrible, it was accually very good. im glad you wrote this. keep up the good work
6/15/2008 c1 Rory Girl
that hade NOTHIND to do with orichir mariou or amineashi
that hade NOTHIND to do with orichir mariou or amineashi
9/16/2007 c1 Lenore Hepburn
Hey, Don't be so hard on yourself! I mean, you call THIS horrible. Either you've never read a horrible fanfic or you're too-TOO much of a perfectionist. This is GREAT! What the hell is wrong with this? Alright, you reflect Sakura's emotions perfectly, I think. If there's a problem, that'd be the ending, I did think that Sasuke was a little too honest. I'd expected him to be more cryptic-isn't he always? But, heck - even most of the famous stories here on fanfic has some parts like that. I really think you are TOO hard on your self.
Hey, Don't be so hard on yourself! I mean, you call THIS horrible. Either you've never read a horrible fanfic or you're too-TOO much of a perfectionist. This is GREAT! What the hell is wrong with this? Alright, you reflect Sakura's emotions perfectly, I think. If there's a problem, that'd be the ending, I did think that Sasuke was a little too honest. I'd expected him to be more cryptic-isn't he always? But, heck - even most of the famous stories here on fanfic has some parts like that. I really think you are TOO hard on your self.
9/13/2007 c1 cassandra
NONONO! it's not horrible at all! i actually loved it! all the sorrow and pain that she's going through was captured so well. it almost made me feel like i was experiencing it! i just wish it wasn't a oneshot. it would have been even better if you made it into a story. i would have loved for you to have gone in detail with everything you mentioned in here. maybe you could do a story similar to this? PLEASE?
NONONO! it's not horrible at all! i actually loved it! all the sorrow and pain that she's going through was captured so well. it almost made me feel like i was experiencing it! i just wish it wasn't a oneshot. it would have been even better if you made it into a story. i would have loved for you to have gone in detail with everything you mentioned in here. maybe you could do a story similar to this? PLEASE?