8/13/2008 c2 4terrasomnian
The pentameter is a little weird, but if you're following the example of the Songs then I guess it's to be expected.
The pentameter is a little weird, but if you're following the example of the Songs then I guess it's to be expected.
8/13/2008 c1 terrasomnian
This almost reads like a passage from the Song of Solomon; very nicely written.
This almost reads like a passage from the Song of Solomon; very nicely written.
7/25/2007 c3 12Tristianna Taylor
Thanks for the lovely reviews in my Labyrinth story.
Love this emotion and feeling. Love the way it tugs at my heart strings.
Thanks for the lovely reviews in my Labyrinth story.
Love this emotion and feeling. Love the way it tugs at my heart strings.
7/25/2007 c3 9CrystalArcher
One word...Awesome. that was sweet and heartfelt...theres not enouph of that here. Keep it up ^_^
One word...Awesome. that was sweet and heartfelt...theres not enouph of that here. Keep it up ^_^
7/24/2007 c3 7Scarbantia
I hope, that the "review" (?) of that Kambe...who? didn't make you sad. He must be a sick person in mind, in soul, in heart.
DO NOT GIVE UP, WRITE MORE!
I hope, that the "review" (?) of that Kambe...who? didn't make you sad. He must be a sick person in mind, in soul, in heart.
DO NOT GIVE UP, WRITE MORE!
7/16/2007 c2 9CrystalArcher
I loved chapter two it was so sweet and the last two lines are awesome, I love the way you linked it to the movie there^_^
I loved chapter two it was so sweet and the last two lines are awesome, I love the way you linked it to the movie there^_^
7/13/2007 c2 Angie
Lovely,
very "song of solomon"ish...
;-)
Lovely,
very "song of solomon"ish...
;-)
7/7/2007 c1 9CrystalArcher
That was so sweet, I thought it summed up Sarah's feelings very well. Can't wait to see more of your work^_^
That was so sweet, I thought it summed up Sarah's feelings very well. Can't wait to see more of your work^_^