for Got Dumped?1/1/2019 c6 Guest
I like your storys but i think this is the worst one if them
I like your storys but i think this is the worst one if them
1/1/2019 c5 Guest
Seems rushed and all over the place. And i doubt in real life they got to stip on the side of the road
Seems rushed and all over the place. And i doubt in real life they got to stip on the side of the road
11/26/2012 c6 reader15
well i just loved it i did not like the jackass that cheated on her the f**k wit from reader15 peace out.
well i just loved it i did not like the jackass that cheated on her the f**k wit from reader15 peace out.
7/14/2007 c1 
9SnowAngel101
Ok well erm your story has alot of potential it really does I like the story line so far its just teh way you have written it its kinda of weird like when you said instead of saying She now looks confused you could say.. Her face cringed in confusion or something like that use words to describe whats happening and not just say flat out she was confused or something I hope none of this sounded rude to you or anything I was just trying to help I do like your story so far so ya good job :)
9SnowAngel101Ok well erm your story has alot of potential it really does I like the story line so far its just teh way you have written it its kinda of weird like when you said instead of saying She now looks confused you could say.. Her face cringed in confusion or something like that use words to describe whats happening and not just say flat out she was confused or something I hope none of this sounded rude to you or anything I was just trying to help I do like your story so far so ya good job :)