
10/29/2015 c1
2GodricGeoffreyGryffindor
This story is just too incoherent for me to follow. For instance, how does one wave in an "undescriptive manner"? Surely you meant something else. Why are Harry and Ron acting so strangely terrified and hiding behind Luna? Who is Harry talking to when he says "For the love of Luna, can you two stop fighting?" Why does Harry rudely say "Luna, I wasn't going to talk to you"? Harry is never rude to Luna.

This story is just too incoherent for me to follow. For instance, how does one wave in an "undescriptive manner"? Surely you meant something else. Why are Harry and Ron acting so strangely terrified and hiding behind Luna? Who is Harry talking to when he says "For the love of Luna, can you two stop fighting?" Why does Harry rudely say "Luna, I wasn't going to talk to you"? Harry is never rude to Luna.
1/4/2008 c2
11petites sorcieres
so funny ^-^I love it ! God there is a lot of of broken wands here lol

so funny ^-^I love it ! God there is a lot of of broken wands here lol
12/22/2007 c2
12Captain Deadpool
The mind is always the first to go... To be honest, this chapter was a little confusing to me.

The mind is always the first to go... To be honest, this chapter was a little confusing to me.