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5/31/2009 c1 Anon without account
Your writing is nice and so is your characterisation, but constant capslock distracts from the story and ,depending on the situation, can kill the "drama" by making it unintenionally hilarious.
11/24/2007 c1 hunt.me.down.amante
my good fucking god.

i loved the ending.

im very fucking scared.

the plot is bloody amazing.

good work

and continue the story you little shit! xD

dont keep me waiting!

aah!
8/17/2007 c1 7lordmasterkris
I like this. I like the point of view in it. Reminds me of Ray Liotta's narration in Goodfellas.

And I don't think it's too hard to believe that someone can pull a door off a car, is it? Certainly not enough to convince someone not to read the rest of the entertaining story in my opinion.

Well done, I'll check out some of your other stuff too.
7/13/2007 c1 9Seifer Almasy 911
I stopped at ripping a door off of a car. That's just stupid. So stupid I can't even find words. He RIPPED a CAR DOOR off of it's hinges ?

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