9/21/2008 c1 kaibasgirlx
This was a nice start. I hope you update soon ^^

Also, watch the grammar, and I think in one sentence you forgot to capitalize Lee's name, otherwise, nicely done. I liked Asuma's line at the end -snickers-

~Téa

7/13/2007 c1 2Pink Illusion
It was good. You might want to capitalise the beginning of sentences in your description.