2/16/2019 c1 1Vulpix 3
This fic initially did have a second part although it appears to have been long deleted, made private, or something. IIRC here's roughly how it went...
Keane wakes up back at his home only to find he's now a Poochyena in a little dog bed instead of his normal one. He steps on a squeaky toy and that plus other events make him realize that the ghost didn't just turn him into a Poochyena but altered everything to make it so that all others think and treat him like he's always been one. Even the family photos at the house now have him as a Pokémon and his parents think of him like he's just one of their pets. Even Durand the Larvitar now thinks of him as having always been a Poochyena and is wondering why his best friend is acting so weird with this human talk. Ultimately Keane decides to go out and try to find out if there's a way to reverse what's happened to him and Durand, despite his apprehension, decides to come with him to help out his friend. They set off together, I think to try and find the ghost, and Chapter 2 ended on that cliffhanger. I don't think there was a Chapter 3.
This fic initially did have a second part although it appears to have been long deleted, made private, or something. IIRC here's roughly how it went...
Keane wakes up back at his home only to find he's now a Poochyena in a little dog bed instead of his normal one. He steps on a squeaky toy and that plus other events make him realize that the ghost didn't just turn him into a Poochyena but altered everything to make it so that all others think and treat him like he's always been one. Even the family photos at the house now have him as a Pokémon and his parents think of him like he's just one of their pets. Even Durand the Larvitar now thinks of him as having always been a Poochyena and is wondering why his best friend is acting so weird with this human talk. Ultimately Keane decides to go out and try to find out if there's a way to reverse what's happened to him and Durand, despite his apprehension, decides to come with him to help out his friend. They set off together, I think to try and find the ghost, and Chapter 2 ended on that cliffhanger. I don't think there was a Chapter 3.
9/21/2015 c1 2A Wandering Shadow
Wow! :D This is great! Are you continuing this? I know that lives get in the way and everything, but this is a great start! XD But no pressure.
Wow! :D This is great! Are you continuing this? I know that lives get in the way and everything, but this is a great start! XD But no pressure.
12/3/2014 c1 a random person
This is great! Please continue!
This is great! Please continue!
3/4/2013 c1 RegretEnvelopsMe
Wow, that was great! I love the story and would love to have a sequel! Great job!
Wow, that was great! I love the story and would love to have a sequel! Great job!
6/13/2012 c1 phantom reviewer
It seems a bit unfair to end a story with a cliffhanger and then not continue it. Just sayin'.
-pr
It seems a bit unfair to end a story with a cliffhanger and then not continue it. Just sayin'.
-pr
6/16/2011 c1 yo
dood! this has some great potential! i'd love to see this as a finished story, as there are too many unfinished works out there these days.
PLEASE CONSIDER MAKING THIS A COMPLETE STORY!
dood! this has some great potential! i'd love to see this as a finished story, as there are too many unfinished works out there these days.
PLEASE CONSIDER MAKING THIS A COMPLETE STORY!
12/9/2010 c1 Edil
You have a good sense as an author. It was just the right flow of story, word choice, and descriptive detail.
This is probably one of the better pieces I've ever read.
Well done.
You have a good sense as an author. It was just the right flow of story, word choice, and descriptive detail.
This is probably one of the better pieces I've ever read.
Well done.
5/26/2010 c1 1oogabooga oogabooga
MAKE IT LONGER!MAKE IT LONGER!MAKE IT LONGER!MAKE IT LONGER!*WOOT!*WOOT!MAKE IT LONGER!MAKE IT LONGER!MAKE IT LONGER!*WOOT!10/10
MAKE IT LONGER!MAKE IT LONGER!MAKE IT LONGER!MAKE IT LONGER!*WOOT!*WOOT!MAKE IT LONGER!MAKE IT LONGER!MAKE IT LONGER!*WOOT!10/10
5/18/2010 c1 Rem 12
Not bad. Make it into a full story and this could get interesting. Write it, WRITE IT NOW! Please?
Not bad. Make it into a full story and this could get interesting. Write it, WRITE IT NOW! Please?
3/27/2009 c1 5Dark5pectre
this sounds very good. It would make a very good story i am sure of it. If you are gonna make t one, please do it soon!
this sounds very good. It would make a very good story i am sure of it. If you are gonna make t one, please do it soon!
6/18/2008 c1 Sam PD
My advice is that you should contine it.
My advice is that you should contine it.
8/6/2007 c2 2DarkPokemonLover
It was a good chapter, but I think things went too suddenly. I don't know, maybe it's because I'm slow sometime, but I would have taken much more time to realize about what had happened to me. And probably be more curious about it, then come to the conclusion you did. I mean, the whole thing is kind of surreal, so it would be normal to think of the whole thing as a dream. He was like: "Oh, pet things. Oh, I'm a pet. (sniffs) Ok, I will change myself back now." The period of doubt about it didn't last long enough. On my own opinion, I think maybe living longer in that state should have convinced him (Like a whole day of normal activities). Anybody could think of something like that in a dream, but there is a point where the dream becomes too real and it cannot be one. That's how I think he should have gone. I mean, the mirror part was obviously a dream, so why this couldn't have been one?
Anyway, I'm done ranting about the shortness of this part of the story, and I can't wait for the rest. Knowing you, I think this story might not have that long before being completed, but it should be good. The writting is enjoying, despite my ranting on minor plot points. The grammar is alright. Maybe it could use more feelings at some places, but I'm not an expert in that. You did a good job nonetheless.
It was a good chapter, but I think things went too suddenly. I don't know, maybe it's because I'm slow sometime, but I would have taken much more time to realize about what had happened to me. And probably be more curious about it, then come to the conclusion you did. I mean, the whole thing is kind of surreal, so it would be normal to think of the whole thing as a dream. He was like: "Oh, pet things. Oh, I'm a pet. (sniffs) Ok, I will change myself back now." The period of doubt about it didn't last long enough. On my own opinion, I think maybe living longer in that state should have convinced him (Like a whole day of normal activities). Anybody could think of something like that in a dream, but there is a point where the dream becomes too real and it cannot be one. That's how I think he should have gone. I mean, the mirror part was obviously a dream, so why this couldn't have been one?
Anyway, I'm done ranting about the shortness of this part of the story, and I can't wait for the rest. Knowing you, I think this story might not have that long before being completed, but it should be good. The writting is enjoying, despite my ranting on minor plot points. The grammar is alright. Maybe it could use more feelings at some places, but I'm not an expert in that. You did a good job nonetheless.