for Cherry Blossom Puppet11/10/2021 c9 
37rwbybomb21
this was fine until i hit this chapter.
why.
just why.
you liberally threw away literally every rule about chakra in the series that, up until now, you've been adhering to...for what? to make naruto this avenger dude who just slays sasori with little effort? chakra strings take seasoned ninja years to master - it took chiyo decades to master it the way she did - and yet naruto can just casually hijack and use, for over an hour, a human puppet? not an ordinary puppet, no, a human one...you know, harder than an ordinary puppet in every conceivable way?
then he can suddenly cast genjutsu which, for naruto, is canonically impossible for the same reasons you've been following chakra rules so far. yeah that just doesn't fly.
gonna stop reading here, but eh.
37rwbybomb21this was fine until i hit this chapter.
why.
just why.
you liberally threw away literally every rule about chakra in the series that, up until now, you've been adhering to...for what? to make naruto this avenger dude who just slays sasori with little effort? chakra strings take seasoned ninja years to master - it took chiyo decades to master it the way she did - and yet naruto can just casually hijack and use, for over an hour, a human puppet? not an ordinary puppet, no, a human one...you know, harder than an ordinary puppet in every conceivable way?
then he can suddenly cast genjutsu which, for naruto, is canonically impossible for the same reasons you've been following chakra rules so far. yeah that just doesn't fly.
gonna stop reading here, but eh.
8/14/2021 c56 SPark681
Hmm, a very interesting story overall I wonder if Sakura will ever be human again or not anyways keep up the great work!
Hmm, a very interesting story overall I wonder if Sakura will ever be human again or not anyways keep up the great work!
8/9/2021 c31 4kingsj10
I've never seen such a large amount of plot armour being used is any story every outside of dragon ball.
Authormakes naruto strong
Authorinsta power seal, can't be allowed to win. Exe
4kingsj10I've never seen such a large amount of plot armour being used is any story every outside of dragon ball.
Authormakes naruto strong
Authorinsta power seal, can't be allowed to win. Exe
7/13/2017 c54 Sakura fan 55
damn you know something that this means Naruto would in a way never age since he is the new nide tailed beast.
damn you know something that this means Naruto would in a way never age since he is the new nide tailed beast.
7/13/2017 c54 3NaruSaku fan 100
a good chapter man things will heat up as Naruto and Ryo are still be chased after all.
3NaruSaku fan 100a good chapter man things will heat up as Naruto and Ryo are still be chased after all.
7/13/2017 c54 super saiyan Sakura Haruno
cool chapter man it sucks to be Rin and Sakura that much I know
cool chapter man it sucks to be Rin and Sakura that much I know
7/13/2017 c54 lost fan don
another well done chapter what should happen is the couple go on a date :D
another well done chapter what should happen is the couple go on a date :D