for Bliss5/14/2012 c1 
5servant123
Good job :) I really like the spin you put on this, although it would've been nice to hear that she wasn't Totally opposed to learning his identity, since that's what I would want to see Blutara lead to eventually. Anyways, fantabulous job. (Especially for writing at 5 am!) Keep up the good work!
And, as always, God bless :)
5servant123Good job :) I really like the spin you put on this, although it would've been nice to hear that she wasn't Totally opposed to learning his identity, since that's what I would want to see Blutara lead to eventually. Anyways, fantabulous job. (Especially for writing at 5 am!) Keep up the good work!
And, as always, God bless :)
8/21/2011 c1 82JackieStarSister
I like this take on Blutara, and this perspective on Katara's relationships with her friends. She always offers people her shoulder, but she needs a shoulder to cry on herself. Good job, keep writing!
82JackieStarSisterI like this take on Blutara, and this perspective on Katara's relationships with her friends. She always offers people her shoulder, but she needs a shoulder to cry on herself. Good job, keep writing!
12/19/2009 c1 2i-am-a-coffe-crazy-writer
i will absolutely not tell u that u r a failure! it was really good! ive never read a fanfic showing katara as a 'burden-carrier'. really good!
2i-am-a-coffe-crazy-writeri will absolutely not tell u that u r a failure! it was really good! ive never read a fanfic showing katara as a 'burden-carrier'. really good!
11/3/2008 c1 12Shadowhawke
Wow, I really liked the buildup you gave to this, as well as the new insight into Katara as 'the carrier of burdens'. While everyone does stress her motherly aspect, this was a side I haven't seen as much in fanfic, so it was great to read.
And that said, it was even more poetic when you tied it into the Blue Spirit. I really like the form of Bluetara here... even though he's never revealed, the fact that that's what she needs really comes across well, and is very interesting in the light of her thoughts about Zuko.
Great writing! :D
12ShadowhawkeWow, I really liked the buildup you gave to this, as well as the new insight into Katara as 'the carrier of burdens'. While everyone does stress her motherly aspect, this was a side I haven't seen as much in fanfic, so it was great to read.
And that said, it was even more poetic when you tied it into the Blue Spirit. I really like the form of Bluetara here... even though he's never revealed, the fact that that's what she needs really comes across well, and is very interesting in the light of her thoughts about Zuko.
Great writing! :D
7/25/2008 c1 1shenaniganize
Wow, I like this one alot. Honestly, it was a new shipping for me. It's intriguing...almost depressing that it's a one-shot. I like the Zutara undertones, and you're right. In this situation they are most definitely hard to avoid. Very angsty, but at the same time, very satisfying. Thank you. :]
1shenaniganizeWow, I like this one alot. Honestly, it was a new shipping for me. It's intriguing...almost depressing that it's a one-shot. I like the Zutara undertones, and you're right. In this situation they are most definitely hard to avoid. Very angsty, but at the same time, very satisfying. Thank you. :]
8/26/2007 c1 33SylverEyes
Wow... that was deep.
Yay for the Blue Spirit! Yay for angsty Katara (because she deserves no happiness!)!
Okay that was awful for me to say. Forget that those words ever left my mouth... or were typed on my keyboard...
I agree with this though. It's nice to have someone who will listen to you, instead of having to listen to everyone else. I like to be there for my friends, but I need someone to be there for me too.
The only thing I wonder is why Zuko is doing this. He knows who she is; why bother to listen? But maybe he wants a place where he can just be a spirit to someone. But why Katara? These are the questions that haunt me...
Nice writing though, especially for that early in the morning.
33SylverEyesWow... that was deep.
Yay for the Blue Spirit! Yay for angsty Katara (because she deserves no happiness!)!
Okay that was awful for me to say. Forget that those words ever left my mouth... or were typed on my keyboard...
I agree with this though. It's nice to have someone who will listen to you, instead of having to listen to everyone else. I like to be there for my friends, but I need someone to be there for me too.
The only thing I wonder is why Zuko is doing this. He knows who she is; why bother to listen? But maybe he wants a place where he can just be a spirit to someone. But why Katara? These are the questions that haunt me...
Nice writing though, especially for that early in the morning.
8/9/2007 c1 54Wohitzi
Ooh, I loved this, it's very well written. Are you sure you didn't edit it? XD
Anyway, very nice little one-shot.
54WohitziOoh, I loved this, it's very well written. Are you sure you didn't edit it? XD
Anyway, very nice little one-shot.
8/3/2007 c1 17curricle
I'm pretty sure I discovered School Time Shipping after you. :/
I noticed that line about the mysterious types from there. X)
-leaves a review about how cool this oneshot is-
17curricleI'm pretty sure I discovered School Time Shipping after you. :/
I noticed that line about the mysterious types from there. X)
-leaves a review about how cool this oneshot is-
7/28/2007 c1 ehzxj29482
I, for one, am here to tell you how cool a oneshot this was! Hehe, I loved it. For something unedited, it was pretty devoid of errors and whatnot. Very nice work!
I, for one, am here to tell you how cool a oneshot this was! Hehe, I loved it. For something unedited, it was pretty devoid of errors and whatnot. Very nice work!
7/20/2007 c1 Wannabe Pirate
You're a failure.
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Ah, I'm just kidding! I really liked this oneshot, it was well-written and it made sense and you didn't have horrendous vocabulary. All in all, this was amazing and I liked it. A lot. So, great job!
You're a failure.
...
Ah, I'm just kidding! I really liked this oneshot, it was well-written and it made sense and you didn't have horrendous vocabulary. All in all, this was amazing and I liked it. A lot. So, great job!
7/19/2007 c1 24ohsoxalive
If School Time Shipping isn't foreshadowing, I don't know what it. xD
Anyways, about your oneshot. Personally, I loved it, mostly because it was well written and it actually made sense. It wasn't all kissy-kissy romance (which I am guilty of writing x.x;) and it was a good reason for Katara to do that.
Just one thing. Next time, stray away from starting sentences with 'She, She, and She' all the time. It gets repetitive and took away a bit of the emotion. At least for me.
Keep writing. -karen
24ohsoxaliveIf School Time Shipping isn't foreshadowing, I don't know what it. xD
Anyways, about your oneshot. Personally, I loved it, mostly because it was well written and it actually made sense. It wasn't all kissy-kissy romance (which I am guilty of writing x.x;) and it was a good reason for Katara to do that.
Just one thing. Next time, stray away from starting sentences with 'She, She, and She' all the time. It gets repetitive and took away a bit of the emotion. At least for me.
Keep writing. -karen