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2/21/2020 c3 Starlord Master
How sweet.
2/21/2020 c2 Starlord Master
Good town.
2/21/2020 c1 Starlord Master
Alright, nice opening.
4/29/2012 c1 Ranmaleopard
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
4/2/2008 c3 StarwolfD1
Nice insertion of Ranma into Guyer. But what happened to pressure points and speed? Will Ranma ever regret atomazing zoanided pops?
7/27/2007 c2 3Gelionlegends
yeah like this chapter, have you been watching the new series episode 2.

though i don't see anything wrong with it as it does help place ranma finding out the name an how to use it.

i was wondering why hinako was glaring at ranma though i can understand the other two but not her?

wonder if now that his ki is enhanced in booster form will he try and learn to use his ki without emotions as he could get alot more power out then. and from the experience on how the zoanoid dodged his ki blast he i think is going to try and make up a new attack that will be faster than his old one like his head beam though maybe he wont say it out loud as it does give the enemy a chance to block or dodge.

though i am surprised that he didn't use his forbidden techniques like the vaccum blades as they are much fast i think than his basic ki attack moko.

though you do wonder how and when he will get the chance to train and what he tries like in the armour or with out then on.

along with figuring out what other weapons and abilities the guyver gives him.

that and if he can still use his ki to boost his physical abilities even more now with the armour on or not, though he can still do the ki blast but enhance the body well that will be something to see along with his armours weapons and any new techniques because of this?

though you do have to wonder how well ranma will fare with fighting lisker, as with what i understand lisker is a trained soldier but how well in the martial arts like ranma as both would be on equal footing except for the use of ki that ranma has, so it would be down to skill and knowledge of the guyvers weapons, abilities and powers.

as in episode three or four lisker says the head beam or infared

laser uses heat, to power it or some such thing so one of his martial arts techniques could help as the soul of ice lowers the tempeture so something got to increase it and that could enhance the power of the beam, or he learns something with the units other abilities to do so?

though i am surprised to see the reporter here so early but it does help get the story moving with it crossing over with ranma.

wonder if any of the tribes in the valley that the amazons come from are decended from the zoanoids?

well i do agree with the others that some spell checking and such need to be done, but i still enjoyed it even with such is in there.

i hope this doesn't put you off and some one does come forward to beta for you.

so hope to see another one of these chapters soon and thanks for continuing.
7/27/2007 c2 Cloudwannabe
You need a spell check or a beta reader because thers lots of typos and some minor plot errors, but other than that its an ok read keep at it.
7/27/2007 c2 3Hiryo
Please get one pre-reader since then you'll get even more readers that can enjoy that really good story! ^^
7/27/2007 c2 4Upgrade
You really need an editor, but good otherwise.
7/26/2007 c2 8Dumbledork
Nice chapter. But you should really run a spellchecker.
7/21/2007 c1 Darkepyon
Interesting begining i think i have only seen this cross ounce and it was like only 3 chapters i hope you go past that.
7/21/2007 c1 Rydan fall
Gelionlegends, there isn't any Sailor Moon in this story!

What the others say about it needing some editing.

But I "really" hope that you will continue.

ps: You might want to transform Ranko into a zoanoid-monster/creature (maybe a lord{-in}?), even if it's only for an omake.

How they could have captured her you ask?

Sleep-gas or something like it.

Wonder if Ranko could fight the reprograming and if a Guyver unit gives you some protection against it.
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