for A Change is coming!7/24/2009 c1 underyourbed
i love this. absolutely wonderful. i'll be waiting for more to come. no rush. ^_^
i love this. absolutely wonderful. i'll be waiting for more to come. no rush. ^_^
7/29/2008 c1 
4tachike
I'm your fifth review I think, will you update now?
loved it by the way.
maantje
4tachikeI'm your fifth review I think, will you update now?
loved it by the way.
maantje
2/16/2008 c1 7HPnLOTRrox
A pretty good start, update soon. :) I'm interested to see where you take this.
7HPnLOTRroxA pretty good start, update soon. :) I'm interested to see where you take this.
12/27/2007 c1 24SilverDrama
I really liked this start, it didn't go to slowly or too fast, but you really should update soon, anddon't say 'well I want five reviews' I updated one of my stories for five chapters without a review, and now I get alot of reviews per chapter, so you really have to update to get reviews, also, withholding a chapter because of lack of revies is cruel to those who reviewed but weren't able to get you to update because 'you need more' I like your story, but get a better attitude of reviews, reviews are blessings, not birth-rights.
-Cherry-
24SilverDramaI really liked this start, it didn't go to slowly or too fast, but you really should update soon, anddon't say 'well I want five reviews' I updated one of my stories for five chapters without a review, and now I get alot of reviews per chapter, so you really have to update to get reviews, also, withholding a chapter because of lack of revies is cruel to those who reviewed but weren't able to get you to update because 'you need more' I like your story, but get a better attitude of reviews, reviews are blessings, not birth-rights.
-Cherry-
11/19/2007 c1 3greeneyedwickeddragon
SWEET CHEEKS! That was so corny I'm still laughing about it. Seriously though your story isn't bad. Have you tried getting together with your friends and having them read over your work? No one gets a best seller on the first try, but you'd be amazed at how great critizism will make your work. It hasn't done much to improve MY spelling though. LOL. Keep writing.
3greeneyedwickeddragonSWEET CHEEKS! That was so corny I'm still laughing about it. Seriously though your story isn't bad. Have you tried getting together with your friends and having them read over your work? No one gets a best seller on the first try, but you'd be amazed at how great critizism will make your work. It hasn't done much to improve MY spelling though. LOL. Keep writing.