for Superstar Kogal Ran2/19/2008 c8 Eliannora
oh who's this girl?
i hope it's a lover-type so that ran will be free of tatsuki :3
oh who's this girl?
i hope it's a lover-type so that ran will be free of tatsuki :3
2/19/2008 c7 Eliannora
oh oh oh,
how interesting.
almost makes me want ran to get with him T.T
but Rei.
rei rei rei, has to be with her.
oh oh oh,
how interesting.
almost makes me want ran to get with him T.T
but Rei.
rei rei rei, has to be with her.
2/18/2008 c3 Eliannora
ek i didn't review the last couple chapters?
what's this!
Well, I enjoyed the last two :3
I'm looking forward to finishing your story son
ek i didn't review the last couple chapters?
what's this!
Well, I enjoyed the last two :3
I'm looking forward to finishing your story son
2/8/2008 c1 Eliannora
just so you know.
bolding in these fanfic thingy's REALLY hurts the eyes.
is your first language english?
im so glad this is a Rein :3
Oh wow lots of chapters, this wil keep me busy.
just so you know.
bolding in these fanfic thingy's REALLY hurts the eyes.
is your first language english?
im so glad this is a Rein :3
Oh wow lots of chapters, this wil keep me busy.
11/10/2007 c18 
2animegirlsana4eva
i'm srry i haven't reviewed in awhile this was awesome! Besides a little grammar and spelling mistakes and what not i love where this story is going. why can't people understand that ran and rei were made for eachother. and also aya gets on my nerves so much, she crys for everything and is so needy. Rei and ran make the best couple. who! not too many good ran and rei storys out there. keep up the good work. o and since their going to a club you should make them dance together, and i mean to a fast song not a slow one.lolz that would be hott.
2animegirlsana4evai'm srry i haven't reviewed in awhile this was awesome! Besides a little grammar and spelling mistakes and what not i love where this story is going. why can't people understand that ran and rei were made for eachother. and also aya gets on my nerves so much, she crys for everything and is so needy. Rei and ran make the best couple. who! not too many good ran and rei storys out there. keep up the good work. o and since their going to a club you should make them dance together, and i mean to a fast song not a slow one.lolz that would be hott.
10/31/2007 c16 animegirlsana4eva
Hi you've been selected to get an anti flame on why I like your work.
1. Your plot and characters are explained thoroughly,and since it is based on a series their are few signs of OOC.
2. You have very few spelling and grammar mistakes that interfere with how well your reader comprehends your work.
3. Good usuage of cliff hangers and and cut offs.
4.Your descriptions are well written, and give your reader visuals.
5. Correct use of vocabulary.
6. Interesting problems and/or plot.
Congradulations, your work here has left a good impression on me, thus me coming forth and writing this review. Wishing you all the best in your writing. ~ Flame Rising Not
Hi you've been selected to get an anti flame on why I like your work.
1. Your plot and characters are explained thoroughly,and since it is based on a series their are few signs of OOC.
2. You have very few spelling and grammar mistakes that interfere with how well your reader comprehends your work.
3. Good usuage of cliff hangers and and cut offs.
4.Your descriptions are well written, and give your reader visuals.
5. Correct use of vocabulary.
6. Interesting problems and/or plot.
Congradulations, your work here has left a good impression on me, thus me coming forth and writing this review. Wishing you all the best in your writing. ~ Flame Rising Not
10/26/2007 c8 kawaii midori-chan
Ur really good, Klau! Thanks for recommending me to read ur story... :D
Continue writing ur story!...
Ur really good, Klau! Thanks for recommending me to read ur story... :D
Continue writing ur story!...