
6/17/2021 c1 guest
A crashing disappointment. The title was deceptive.
A crashing disappointment. The title was deceptive.
9/4/2008 c1
23TheBeautyOfTheGrave
Aww this is so sweet ^^
Not a big fan of SSLE but you could convince me :3
Keep up the writing, it's great xD

Aww this is so sweet ^^
Not a big fan of SSLE but you could convince me :3
Keep up the writing, it's great xD
7/22/2007 c1 donttakeyourloveaway
This is really nice ^^
I actually like the dialogue heavy first part; it contrasts nicely with the description of the end. You captured their emotions nicely too, with both of their regret.
This is really nice ^^
I actually like the dialogue heavy first part; it contrasts nicely with the description of the end. You captured their emotions nicely too, with both of their regret.
7/22/2007 c1
10openattheclose
Wow, that was really good. I'm not normally a L/S fan, but the story of them in DE was really...romantic? Not the right word. Tragic, and I usually like tragic love in HP. Well done. =D

Wow, that was really good. I'm not normally a L/S fan, but the story of them in DE was really...romantic? Not the right word. Tragic, and I usually like tragic love in HP. Well done. =D