for Small Surprises, Big Consequences2/14/2008 c10 Mike
Interesting story so far, honestly I was a little disappointed that it's unfinished, but thats my fault for not checking before hand ;)
Something tells me that this is no where near as bad as its going to get. By the feel of it, it's gonna get a lot darker before it finally comes to its apex. Keep on writing!
Interesting story so far, honestly I was a little disappointed that it's unfinished, but thats my fault for not checking before hand ;)
Something tells me that this is no where near as bad as its going to get. By the feel of it, it's gonna get a lot darker before it finally comes to its apex. Keep on writing!
2/13/2008 c10 
1Arcel Windwing
This is a very well written story and I can't wait for more.
It seems that the only reason Shego and Agni dislike there Mom/Grandma is becuase a clashing of personalities. I just think Shego is to stubborn to see that her Mom does care. And as for her being angry about her Mom telling her that if she goes, not to come back, she is the one that brought it up in the first place, and she was only trying to do what was best for her grand daughter. If I didn't know Shego's personality (at all!), I would have thought that she was trying to try to make Shego stay by giving her an ultimatum... maybe she thought it would work considering the main matter at hand was Shego's Daughter... Shutting up now.
1Arcel WindwingThis is a very well written story and I can't wait for more.
It seems that the only reason Shego and Agni dislike there Mom/Grandma is becuase a clashing of personalities. I just think Shego is to stubborn to see that her Mom does care. And as for her being angry about her Mom telling her that if she goes, not to come back, she is the one that brought it up in the first place, and she was only trying to do what was best for her grand daughter. If I didn't know Shego's personality (at all!), I would have thought that she was trying to try to make Shego stay by giving her an ultimatum... maybe she thought it would work considering the main matter at hand was Shego's Daughter... Shutting up now.
2/13/2008 c10 Andrew Cloud
great story. i'd say it's almost on par with Nodrogs. i have to say kim is right: both shego and agni exadurate Roza. i can actually see why she said those things to shego. as for the next part, it's obvious that htere is going to be a confrentation between shego and roza, and now that i understand her, i really don't think roza is going to give agni up. she 's trying to teach shego a lesson, and by making agni kim's problem, she's not learning anything. this is probably stuff you already know (hell, YOU'RE the author), but i thought i might as well say it anyway.i honestly think roza will give some type of speech that will click somrthing in shego's brain, and shego and agni will end up living together after all, but i also have a feeling kim will be a a major part of both agni's AND shego's lives (outside the hero vs villian stuff) and i here ya with midterms and school stuff (college's a bitch, ain't it?)
great story. i'd say it's almost on par with Nodrogs. i have to say kim is right: both shego and agni exadurate Roza. i can actually see why she said those things to shego. as for the next part, it's obvious that htere is going to be a confrentation between shego and roza, and now that i understand her, i really don't think roza is going to give agni up. she 's trying to teach shego a lesson, and by making agni kim's problem, she's not learning anything. this is probably stuff you already know (hell, YOU'RE the author), but i thought i might as well say it anyway.i honestly think roza will give some type of speech that will click somrthing in shego's brain, and shego and agni will end up living together after all, but i also have a feeling kim will be a a major part of both agni's AND shego's lives (outside the hero vs villian stuff) and i here ya with midterms and school stuff (college's a bitch, ain't it?)
2/13/2008 c10 18BatNeko
A good read! I really enjoyed it, and I'll be keeping my eyes open for more. Definitely a fresh take on the characters.
18BatNekoA good read! I really enjoyed it, and I'll be keeping my eyes open for more. Definitely a fresh take on the characters.
2/11/2008 c10 13Seravy
I was pretty sure I reviewed this chapter but I guess I didn't? hm. anyways, I loved the lead up to meeting Shego's mom. I was imaging something really scary. in the flashback, I find myself really likeing Roza. she has this cool sternness about her that is quite attracting. and (from what I got from it at least) seems like she does care for Shego and Agni. the flashback really showed her point of view of the incident. the situation you've set up is realistic and well thought out in that not everything is clear cut. Shego and Roza both have their reasons and are right and wrong in their own ways which is usually the way things are. gray area. P.S. between Shego and Agni, Kim is doomed. anyways, great chapter. keep writing!
13SeravyI was pretty sure I reviewed this chapter but I guess I didn't? hm. anyways, I loved the lead up to meeting Shego's mom. I was imaging something really scary. in the flashback, I find myself really likeing Roza. she has this cool sternness about her that is quite attracting. and (from what I got from it at least) seems like she does care for Shego and Agni. the flashback really showed her point of view of the incident. the situation you've set up is realistic and well thought out in that not everything is clear cut. Shego and Roza both have their reasons and are right and wrong in their own ways which is usually the way things are. gray area. P.S. between Shego and Agni, Kim is doomed. anyways, great chapter. keep writing!
2/8/2008 c10 8DreamingOfMyGirl
intersting... some how I don't think kim is going to like shego's mom at all... it should be interesting to watch it all go down...
~dreamer
8DreamingOfMyGirlintersting... some how I don't think kim is going to like shego's mom at all... it should be interesting to watch it all go down...
~dreamer
2/8/2008 c10 Guest
great update. between Agni and Shego, Kim is definitely doomed. As always, I love Shego's snarky comebacks and hot temper. The build up to meeting Shego's mom was really well done. It really got me all rallied up to see just what sort of person she is.
I have to say, especially during the flashback, I like Shego's mom. Correct me if I'm wrong but Roza seems to be the tough-love type but she does care about Shego and Agni in her own way. Great situation you've set up here. I'm sympathizing with both Shego and Roza, as they both have their reasons, which is a much more realistic situation than just making her a big bitch. great writing as usual, keep it up!
great update. between Agni and Shego, Kim is definitely doomed. As always, I love Shego's snarky comebacks and hot temper. The build up to meeting Shego's mom was really well done. It really got me all rallied up to see just what sort of person she is.
I have to say, especially during the flashback, I like Shego's mom. Correct me if I'm wrong but Roza seems to be the tough-love type but she does care about Shego and Agni in her own way. Great situation you've set up here. I'm sympathizing with both Shego and Roza, as they both have their reasons, which is a much more realistic situation than just making her a big bitch. great writing as usual, keep it up!
2/8/2008 c10 Tonya S
Roza kinda reminds me of how I'd picture a certain Betty(And now that I think about it, Will) would be... except with a slight bit(0.01%) more affection for her kids than Roza displays publicly. But then again, come on, look at the crap between Sheldon and Betty. Strangely enough, she kinda reminds me of Nana Possible. I guess it's 'cause she seems like the type that needs to be shown that she's in the wrong before accepting it.
I'm going to selfish for two minutes here and say: Man, I really want Kim to show those two up now (Please? Please? Please?) and somehow bond with Roza. Considering how you painted the woman though, I'm glad that Shego and Agni didn't say anything to Kim about her beyond the "She's a *beep*." Kim needs to be able to go in there and use her natural Kim-ness to judge the person. I vote for Kim doing a one-on-one this and 'cause Kim hissing at Shego (and Agni) to "shut up and let me talk" every five seconds wouldn't help her case with Roza.
Vote asside, I still say they should've brought Ron, Rufus, and Wade in this; after all, it did take all of Team Possible to work out a deal with Team Impossible (legality/blackmail via Wade and charming via Ron's "have a naco"). But then again... Roza's got a "Secret Agent" vibe not the "have a cookie, we're making them at the bake sale" vibe so that route could've gone dead the minute Ron steps into the room. Plus Shego already owes Kim for even putting up with her daughter, so she'd probably have to restrain the urge to murder someone in their sleep if she ended up owing "The Buffoon" as well.
Roza kinda reminds me of how I'd picture a certain Betty(And now that I think about it, Will) would be... except with a slight bit(0.01%) more affection for her kids than Roza displays publicly. But then again, come on, look at the crap between Sheldon and Betty. Strangely enough, she kinda reminds me of Nana Possible. I guess it's 'cause she seems like the type that needs to be shown that she's in the wrong before accepting it.
I'm going to selfish for two minutes here and say: Man, I really want Kim to show those two up now (Please? Please? Please?) and somehow bond with Roza. Considering how you painted the woman though, I'm glad that Shego and Agni didn't say anything to Kim about her beyond the "She's a *beep*." Kim needs to be able to go in there and use her natural Kim-ness to judge the person. I vote for Kim doing a one-on-one this and 'cause Kim hissing at Shego (and Agni) to "shut up and let me talk" every five seconds wouldn't help her case with Roza.
Vote asside, I still say they should've brought Ron, Rufus, and Wade in this; after all, it did take all of Team Possible to work out a deal with Team Impossible (legality/blackmail via Wade and charming via Ron's "have a naco"). But then again... Roza's got a "Secret Agent" vibe not the "have a cookie, we're making them at the bake sale" vibe so that route could've gone dead the minute Ron steps into the room. Plus Shego already owes Kim for even putting up with her daughter, so she'd probably have to restrain the urge to murder someone in their sleep if she ended up owing "The Buffoon" as well.
2/7/2008 c10 14Ley93
dude it's been a while but i gotta tell u, u haven't lost it tis was a sick update i can't wait to read more pms
14Ley93dude it's been a while but i gotta tell u, u haven't lost it tis was a sick update i can't wait to read more pms
2/7/2008 c10 90eoraptor
am always pleased to see more chapters of this :) though I must admit, having to wait so long between installments is making bit a bit hard to keep track of what all has transpired (almost forgot Shego's name this time) Not much I can comment on, though I loved finally learning more of what happened that night. Will PM on KP.Haven with ideas for you. :)
90eoraptoram always pleased to see more chapters of this :) though I must admit, having to wait so long between installments is making bit a bit hard to keep track of what all has transpired (almost forgot Shego's name this time) Not much I can comment on, though I loved finally learning more of what happened that night. Will PM on KP.Haven with ideas for you. :)
2/5/2008 c9 1BioDragon
This is a sweet story! One of the best I've read recently in the Kim Possible area. Can't wait to read what happens when Kim meets the dragon that raised Shego.
1BioDragonThis is a sweet story! One of the best I've read recently in the Kim Possible area. Can't wait to read what happens when Kim meets the dragon that raised Shego.
2/4/2008 c9 13Seravy
this is a great fic. well written with great imagery and prose. I love your sense of humour and how well you've thought out Shego's past. everyone was in character. most impressive was how much I like Agni. OCs are usually annoying but she's really likeable while adding to Shego and Kim's character. I really enjoyed this fic... hope you'll be updating soon.
13Seravythis is a great fic. well written with great imagery and prose. I love your sense of humour and how well you've thought out Shego's past. everyone was in character. most impressive was how much I like Agni. OCs are usually annoying but she's really likeable while adding to Shego and Kim's character. I really enjoyed this fic... hope you'll be updating soon.
11/22/2007 c9 5JonathanDP81
I'm really enjoying this story. Agni's a great little character and I look forward to more.
5JonathanDP81I'm really enjoying this story. Agni's a great little character and I look forward to more.