8/4/2007 c1 32Melya Liz
Just a tip when your going from her thoughts and what she’s doing like

“Oh my god I am going to be late for school! Meo got dressed, brushed her teeth and ran to school.”

You might what to add something so the readers know like maybe something like this

“Oh my god I am going to be late for school!”

Meo got dressed, brushed her teeth and ran to school.

Just a thought :D sorry I have a bad habbit or saying what I’m thinking when I read a fanfic… ^^;

Anyway that was a really cute little story :D

I thought it was cute how you added the little jewish thing to Naruto

I also liked the whole Diaryish writing :D very nice

Anyway look at me I’m reviewing! Sheesh I’m so sorry this took so long… Liz is a bad girl

Keep writing (and telling me about it :D)