for The Dark and Comforting8/2/2007 c1 EnglishChocolate
Hey, this is pretty good, but is it finished. I see it says complete but i donno i think it could do with a bit more or another part to it. It was good though.
Hey, this is pretty good, but is it finished. I see it says complete but i donno i think it could do with a bit more or another part to it. It was good though.
7/31/2007 c1 
10DoodleTaffy
that was great,i liked it.it was funny too,especially the abby and mcgee part,but why where they there?pls continue.idk,u dont have 2,u culd leave it here,but u could continue if u wanted.idk,lol.but um,yeah,great story,i loved zivas mood and allit ws asad,but well descriptive.and c'mon mcgee,i dont think you culd b haullecating,wats ur reason,its late?lol.bye!:D
10DoodleTaffythat was great,i liked it.it was funny too,especially the abby and mcgee part,but why where they there?pls continue.idk,u dont have 2,u culd leave it here,but u could continue if u wanted.idk,lol.but um,yeah,great story,i loved zivas mood and allit ws asad,but well descriptive.and c'mon mcgee,i dont think you culd b haullecating,wats ur reason,its late?lol.bye!:D