for True Love 310/7/2013 c1 Nanai
I LOVE IT NICE STORY :)
I LOVE IT NICE STORY :)
4/14/2009 c1 
6Vospader21
The lemons where good, admittedly not the best lemons I've seen, but good none the less. Also I noticed your working on your LOP (lack of plot, it's an internet slang that I just made up, with any luck it'll catch on)problem. The plot here was truly a good improvement in comparison with your other works. But still there is a bit of LOP here. But overall good job. I give it a 4* out of 5*.
6Vospader21The lemons where good, admittedly not the best lemons I've seen, but good none the less. Also I noticed your working on your LOP (lack of plot, it's an internet slang that I just made up, with any luck it'll catch on)problem. The plot here was truly a good improvement in comparison with your other works. But still there is a bit of LOP here. But overall good job. I give it a 4* out of 5*.
5/13/2008 c1 2Sacred Beast117
I loved this story it was so good...please can u make a sequel or like i said before make a chapter story that will make it all epic please u did such a great job and now like i said before
AWESOME LEMON
2Sacred Beast117I loved this story it was so good...please can u make a sequel or like i said before make a chapter story that will make it all epic please u did such a great job and now like i said before
AWESOME LEMON
1/20/2008 c1 3Yondaime-Sensei
Interesting twist. Once again, like the smut-tastic scenes.
Another tip: It's good if you bold techniques so that people now them. Also, it's Rasengan, not Rasangan.
Anyways, still liked it. Keep it up when you can.
3Yondaime-SenseiInteresting twist. Once again, like the smut-tastic scenes.
Another tip: It's good if you bold techniques so that people now them. Also, it's Rasengan, not Rasangan.
Anyways, still liked it. Keep it up when you can.
9/28/2007 c1 77Winter-Rae
Wonderful third part!
I loved it!
Damn that Sasuke! I hate him with a firey passion of a thousand suns! I seriously want him to die!
Anyway nice work, steamy fluffy and slightly action packed! Lovely!
Keep up the awesome work!
Winter-Rae xoxo
77Winter-RaeWonderful third part!
I loved it!
Damn that Sasuke! I hate him with a firey passion of a thousand suns! I seriously want him to die!
Anyway nice work, steamy fluffy and slightly action packed! Lovely!
Keep up the awesome work!
Winter-Rae xoxo
8/18/2007 c1 Samurai.J
This is nice, really all three of them were. I can only hope the next one settles the score with Sasuke. the begining first one was direct, cut to the point, the second was a nice relaxer and the third provided a nice bit of drama. If this is what you can do then I can't wait to read you'r next work, keep up the good work!
This is nice, really all three of them were. I can only hope the next one settles the score with Sasuke. the begining first one was direct, cut to the point, the second was a nice relaxer and the third provided a nice bit of drama. If this is what you can do then I can't wait to read you'r next work, keep up the good work!
7/28/2007 c1 13narusakufan1985
That was great. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for more. Naruto and Sakura forever.
13narusakufan1985That was great. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for more. Naruto and Sakura forever.