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5/13/2012 c1 7Arwenia
This reminds me of a story I read somewhere on this site. I got it at my favorites I think... if it's not still saved on my phone somewhere.

Anyway... It's about Naruto living eternally and it's like a curse. He can't die even if he wanted to, so he is forced to live forever.

It's a really sad, sad story and is so reminds me of it-your song I mean.

It's a perfect collaboration.

Even though it probably isn't meant to be that way.

Amazing song! I like it. :)
4/20/2011 c1 1PirateSanZoro
Eeeeep! Yet another one of your awesome poems!
1/10/2010 c1 Wordsplat
This is beautiful...I think it descibes exactly how most ninja would think after a long time of service
7/29/2008 c1 5Time To Make It Rain
It's funny how Naruto glosses over most of the unpleasant aspects of a ninja's job.
8/23/2007 c1 pifp
"The terror on there faces"

should be 'The terror on their faces'

and

"I'm a murder"

should be 'I'm a murderer'.

Sorry, ^_^U

Apart from that, I like it as a soliloquy.
7/31/2007 c1 9Hawk wing
wow that was good! it never occurs to many that that is the life of all those who chooses such a path... it's weird thinking that a person like naruto has killed
7/31/2007 c1 38Gaara's-pandachan101
Damn. That was an exelent poem! Nice job!

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