for Necromancer Naruto8/15/2018 c1 Guest
"jered"? Isn't that VERY english a name for a JAPANESE setting? It's like "bob" or "george", "ivan" or something along those lines, doesn't fit very well.
"jered"? Isn't that VERY english a name for a JAPANESE setting? It's like "bob" or "george", "ivan" or something along those lines, doesn't fit very well.
6/12/2018 c3 Guest
Well I hate that you gave the whole "his match will be postponed" a repeat. NO REAL (or even imagined COMPETENT) military establishment, would "postpone" a match, especially in front OF THEIR BOSS (the diaymo) and all the clients, it's like saying "I can't even control my own ninja" and "I don't punish them".. It's not a good idea AT ALL. (another time that kishi dropped the ball in canon).
Well I hate that you gave the whole "his match will be postponed" a repeat. NO REAL (or even imagined COMPETENT) military establishment, would "postpone" a match, especially in front OF THEIR BOSS (the diaymo) and all the clients, it's like saying "I can't even control my own ninja" and "I don't punish them".. It's not a good idea AT ALL. (another time that kishi dropped the ball in canon).
8/17/2016 c4 
10Wolfone10
Never understood why every author makes naruto pass out, he's SUPPOSED TO HAVE GODLIKE STAMINA! that's CANON.. He can't pass out! But for some reason every power-up or fight he crashes after.. It really makes no sense.. He's supposed to have more chakra then a KAGE and more stamina (because of the kyuubi AND because he's an uzumaki) then any human POSSIBLE! IF you wanna go with the LOGICAL conclusion, (and this is not O.P. it's just LOGIC)... he shouldn't be PHYSICALLY ABLE to be knocked out and POISONS/DRUGS should have NO EFFECT whatsoever on him! Think about it, he has so much YANG energy in him, it's what makes him an idiot...He's literately EXPLODING with life!
10Wolfone10Never understood why every author makes naruto pass out, he's SUPPOSED TO HAVE GODLIKE STAMINA! that's CANON.. He can't pass out! But for some reason every power-up or fight he crashes after.. It really makes no sense.. He's supposed to have more chakra then a KAGE and more stamina (because of the kyuubi AND because he's an uzumaki) then any human POSSIBLE! IF you wanna go with the LOGICAL conclusion, (and this is not O.P. it's just LOGIC)... he shouldn't be PHYSICALLY ABLE to be knocked out and POISONS/DRUGS should have NO EFFECT whatsoever on him! Think about it, he has so much YANG energy in him, it's what makes him an idiot...He's literately EXPLODING with life!
8/15/2016 c2 Wolfone10
Confusion, naruto is LORD of the dead... HE is basically "OK" with kyuubi.. Then why in the world would he have to OR want to participate in the chunnin exams? With kyuubi ALONE he's above KAGE! Add in lord of the dead.. and well, it kinda becomes POINTLESS... what he wants to beat on little children because he want to watch them cry? If he can TAKE APART a jounin.. then give a battlefield promotion and get rid of this stupid stuff.
Confusion, naruto is LORD of the dead... HE is basically "OK" with kyuubi.. Then why in the world would he have to OR want to participate in the chunnin exams? With kyuubi ALONE he's above KAGE! Add in lord of the dead.. and well, it kinda becomes POINTLESS... what he wants to beat on little children because he want to watch them cry? If he can TAKE APART a jounin.. then give a battlefield promotion and get rid of this stupid stuff.
3/20/2015 c4 chris kidder
keep on writing
keep on writing
5/21/2014 c4 23Remzal Von Enili
Im really happy to see another good necromancy naruto story. There are so few which is a shame since necromantic powers are so versatile
23Remzal Von EniliIm really happy to see another good necromancy naruto story. There are so few which is a shame since necromantic powers are so versatile
4/6/2014 c4 2Guardian-Wolf-227
Not bad. Needs more killing and necromancy like reviveing his and sasukes mothers like edo tensi
2Guardian-Wolf-227Not bad. Needs more killing and necromancy like reviveing his and sasukes mothers like edo tensi
11/12/2012 c4 Guest
sweet story bro
sweet story bro
7/6/2011 c4 30Manga154
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"khsvbileb"
"Nice"
You asked for them...
Great so far, I thought he would summon dead people like the rain Nin he killed.
30Manga154"..."
"khsvbileb"
"Nice"
You asked for them...
Great so far, I thought he would summon dead people like the rain Nin he killed.
10/16/2010 c4 1smexyforever
nice!
make a bad-ass missingnin naruto, please ! (puppy-gerberos no jutsu)
1smexyforevernice!
make a bad-ass missingnin naruto, please ! (puppy-gerberos no jutsu)
6/24/2010 c4 twilight
hey bud i've been looking for a good necromancer fanfic. I would have quit reading if it had been a naruxhina fic becuase both narusaku and naruhina are over used.
hey bud i've been looking for a good necromancer fanfic. I would have quit reading if it had been a naruxhina fic becuase both narusaku and naruhina are over used.