for Back Again, Harry?10/7 c20 Sleepyhawk502
Left wanting more, I hope someday you will complete this wonderful story. Thanks for sharing.
Left wanting more, I hope someday you will complete this wonderful story. Thanks for sharing.
10/6 c20 
5KarisTasogare
sad, a pre-finale cliff-hanger.
left (likely) forever unresolved
a good story, left incomplete
thus a ruined experience.
5KarisTasogaresad, a pre-finale cliff-hanger.
left (likely) forever unresolved
a good story, left incomplete
thus a ruined experience.
9/25 c20 Contrarybookgal
Ah! What a genius execution of the "mind back in time" idea! The plotting is so careful and deliberate, and the characterizations so good-and then I'm sure real life has butted in and there goes the story.
If you've still even a draft, unfinished, I'm sure there are lots of us who would love to see even one more chapter! Hope that all has gone well with you in the intervening years, and that you've kept writing for yourself or others; you've got a gift! Thank you for being an author.
Ah! What a genius execution of the "mind back in time" idea! The plotting is so careful and deliberate, and the characterizations so good-and then I'm sure real life has butted in and there goes the story.
If you've still even a draft, unfinished, I'm sure there are lots of us who would love to see even one more chapter! Hope that all has gone well with you in the intervening years, and that you've kept writing for yourself or others; you've got a gift! Thank you for being an author.
5/31 c12 5Amerise Rei
I am just digging this story! I love how Remus is involved and no the big reveal! Oh abd the twins involvement is brilliant. Can’t get enough of them. I also like how Snape is still his surly self but testing Harry to see who he takes after more. I am looking gorward to the rest but I do hope you update! Excellent writing!
5Amerise ReiI am just digging this story! I love how Remus is involved and no the big reveal! Oh abd the twins involvement is brilliant. Can’t get enough of them. I also like how Snape is still his surly self but testing Harry to see who he takes after more. I am looking gorward to the rest but I do hope you update! Excellent writing!
5/22 c10 14ScarfedWriter
I know it's quite debated, but I always thought it is kind of dumb to assume that Harry's parseltongue would be gone the moment he stopped being an horrocrux. i mean, call me crazy, but I think assuming having a foreign magical soul attached to yours for seventeen almost eighteen years would definitively leave traces or affect your own soul, is kind of logical. It didn't happen to Ginny it seems, yeah, but i would say that's because she didn't become an horrocrux.
Not complaining though, since it seems it is gonna be a core part of the story, just commenting on it.
14ScarfedWriterI know it's quite debated, but I always thought it is kind of dumb to assume that Harry's parseltongue would be gone the moment he stopped being an horrocrux. i mean, call me crazy, but I think assuming having a foreign magical soul attached to yours for seventeen almost eighteen years would definitively leave traces or affect your own soul, is kind of logical. It didn't happen to Ginny it seems, yeah, but i would say that's because she didn't become an horrocrux.
Not complaining though, since it seems it is gonna be a core part of the story, just commenting on it.
5/12 c5 DanYHKim
Reading this, it suddenly occurs to me that scabbers needs to stay with Ron long enough for him to be photographed when the Weasleys win their sweepstakes that takes them to Egypt. That was the motivation for Sirius to escape, and it would otherwise be very difficult to get him out of prison. I suppose that capturing Pettigrew alive might work, if an effort were made to ensure that his questioning and the trial were not interfered with.
Reading this, it suddenly occurs to me that scabbers needs to stay with Ron long enough for him to be photographed when the Weasleys win their sweepstakes that takes them to Egypt. That was the motivation for Sirius to escape, and it would otherwise be very difficult to get him out of prison. I suppose that capturing Pettigrew alive might work, if an effort were made to ensure that his questioning and the trial were not interfered with.
4/18 c20 tawnya.penner
Fantastic story, love it! Hope there is more soon, but am waiting patiently, i swear!
Fantastic story, love it! Hope there is more soon, but am waiting patiently, i swear!
3/9 c20 14Freddie Rindklip
I quit reading at Chapter 12. I disagreed with some of what you wrote, and the slow pace. In addition it looks like the fic has been abandoned. Thank you for writing.
14Freddie RindklipI quit reading at Chapter 12. I disagreed with some of what you wrote, and the slow pace. In addition it looks like the fic has been abandoned. Thank you for writing.
3/9 c4 Freddie Rindklip
Talking about Malfoy throwing objects in potions. Malfoy tries hurting Griffs, Harry hurts him.
Talking about Malfoy throwing objects in potions. Malfoy tries hurting Griffs, Harry hurts him.
12/18/2023 c8 integralz656
Again, I fell for the good reviews, and began to read. And in the end, it turned out to be a terribly boring story, more like a retelling of the original. Thanks, I've already read the original!
Again, I fell for the good reviews, and began to read. And in the end, it turned out to be a terribly boring story, more like a retelling of the original. Thanks, I've already read the original!
11/30/2023 c20 Camera Cat
Hey! Enjoyed this very much, it’s very fun. I like how you started in an unusual place for HP time travel fic and how you had Harry start making minor changes immediately—I love to see time travel stories that don’t retread canon beat for beat!
Hey! Enjoyed this very much, it’s very fun. I like how you started in an unusual place for HP time travel fic and how you had Harry start making minor changes immediately—I love to see time travel stories that don’t retread canon beat for beat!
10/7/2023 c5 Guest
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9/7/2023 c20 HalfBlood Prince
This is relly good, why this was not updated? :C
This is relly good, why this was not updated? :C