for The Story Of White Dove And Strong Panther7/19/2011 c13 
7Forgotten dragon
This is really good i love this theme for the story good job hopefully update soon
7Forgotten dragonThis is really good i love this theme for the story good job hopefully update soon
7/9/2011 c13 DreamBig
you should continue the story it is so interesting.Trust me most stories don't catch my attention easily! ^-^ Please continue it! Or better please try to finish it if you have the time.
you should continue the story it is so interesting.Trust me most stories don't catch my attention easily! ^-^ Please continue it! Or better please try to finish it if you have the time.
7/5/2011 c13 24KaL KeY
I love this story! You have got to update soon! I cant wait to see what happens next, its such a interesting and unique story. Do continue it soon, I Cant Wait!
24KaL KeYI love this story! You have got to update soon! I cant wait to see what happens next, its such a interesting and unique story. Do continue it soon, I Cant Wait!
3/30/2010 c13 8lemon-and-chai2B
This story is so good! i love these kind of AUs. The challenge really had me doki doki doki doki, so nervous DX poor Fai, he must have been so terrified. The part in the cave was awesome, LOL at Kuro being drawn in by Fai's siren attack (lololol). I loved it. The part where Kuro was sort of blind and walking on water was amazing, as was the glowing stones, it was harder than I thought it'd be and so suspenseful. I'm so sad they were separated from the children, that must be so hard on Fai... update soon pretty please!
8lemon-and-chai2BThis story is so good! i love these kind of AUs. The challenge really had me doki doki doki doki, so nervous DX poor Fai, he must have been so terrified. The part in the cave was awesome, LOL at Kuro being drawn in by Fai's siren attack (lololol). I loved it. The part where Kuro was sort of blind and walking on water was amazing, as was the glowing stones, it was harder than I thought it'd be and so suspenseful. I'm so sad they were separated from the children, that must be so hard on Fai... update soon pretty please!
3/17/2010 c13 98Rahar Moonfire
I thought that was Elvish Fay was speaking. It just...sounded like it. I don't know. It felt like it. ...I'm gunna stop now. Yes, I'm a Tolkien fangirl *cough* Legolas *cough* I love how you wound that into your story. It's the perfect language to cast spells in in my opinion. Keep it up. Aka, update ASAP! ;)
98Rahar MoonfireI thought that was Elvish Fay was speaking. It just...sounded like it. I don't know. It felt like it. ...I'm gunna stop now. Yes, I'm a Tolkien fangirl *cough* Legolas *cough* I love how you wound that into your story. It's the perfect language to cast spells in in my opinion. Keep it up. Aka, update ASAP! ;)
3/17/2010 c13 1librarycat9
lol that's okay a lot happened... and I have met someone who can speak elvish... fluently... I have a knife collection *shrugs* to each their own :}
1librarycat9lol that's okay a lot happened... and I have met someone who can speak elvish... fluently... I have a knife collection *shrugs* to each their own :}
3/17/2010 c13 61TrueDespair
haha! we all have obessions my dear, it's just the matter of whether we want to show it or not. XD The words though did seem very mystical as Kurogane pointed out. I think that Touya is putting more pressure on them then necessary. Good chapter! can't wait for the next one! ^_^
-TrueDespairOverlord
61TrueDespairhaha! we all have obessions my dear, it's just the matter of whether we want to show it or not. XD The words though did seem very mystical as Kurogane pointed out. I think that Touya is putting more pressure on them then necessary. Good chapter! can't wait for the next one! ^_^
-TrueDespairOverlord
3/11/2010 c12 98Rahar Moonfire
I don't care that it was short. Why? Because YOU UPDATED! I about leapt out of my chair when I saw this. It made me so happy. Thank you, thank you, thank you. I was beginning to think you'd left it for good. *hugs you* Thanks bunches. Now, update again. ASAP! ;)
98Rahar MoonfireI don't care that it was short. Why? Because YOU UPDATED! I about leapt out of my chair when I saw this. It made me so happy. Thank you, thank you, thank you. I was beginning to think you'd left it for good. *hugs you* Thanks bunches. Now, update again. ASAP! ;)
3/11/2010 c12 61TrueDespair
Man! Kurogane and Fai never get a break do they? when you think they got out of one thing they get landed in another! I hope things work out for them. Nice chapter! ^_^
-TrueDespairOverlord
61TrueDespairMan! Kurogane and Fai never get a break do they? when you think they got out of one thing they get landed in another! I hope things work out for them. Nice chapter! ^_^
-TrueDespairOverlord
1/18/2010 c11 1librarycat9
oh no! *GASPS* *hyperventilates* there aren't any more chapters... (sobs softly and then passes out from lack of air) (giggle)
1librarycat9oh no! *GASPS* *hyperventilates* there aren't any more chapters... (sobs softly and then passes out from lack of air) (giggle)