
11/3/2008 c1
1Hides-His-Heart
Wow this story is amazing. The both of them are so hot each other that it just makes the story sexier. i a die hard Naruto&Sakura fan and this has to be one of the best. although i can't stand the little hints at sasuke have Sakura's heart. i know, i know it's part of the story but i can't stand that emo getting in the way of them.

Wow this story is amazing. The both of them are so hot each other that it just makes the story sexier. i a die hard Naruto&Sakura fan and this has to be one of the best. although i can't stand the little hints at sasuke have Sakura's heart. i know, i know it's part of the story but i can't stand that emo getting in the way of them.
8/7/2008 c1
1innactiveAccount000
OMG! I love this story! Please tell me that you are going to continue it! This is so awsome!
This is going straight onto my favorites!

OMG! I love this story! Please tell me that you are going to continue it! This is so awsome!
This is going straight onto my favorites!
6/24/2008 c1
2MiKe2vIcIoUs
This was something else. Really good. I think it would be very interesting to see what happens during this story though. This chapter was amazing, from beginning to the end.

This was something else. Really good. I think it would be very interesting to see what happens during this story though. This chapter was amazing, from beginning to the end.
9/13/2007 c1
4Useful76
ITs a nice little excerpt. It was well written and tastefully done. Good work.

ITs a nice little excerpt. It was well written and tastefully done. Good work.
8/31/2007 c1
43Alis Volat Propris
wow...I liked it albeit from the minor spelling errors, but compared to the other narusaku fics I've read this was pleasant. Naruto is very wise in your fic. thanks for the read

wow...I liked it albeit from the minor spelling errors, but compared to the other narusaku fics I've read this was pleasant. Naruto is very wise in your fic. thanks for the read
8/26/2007 c1
2Cr4zylilflip
Some deep emotional evaluation. One of the better "deep" fics of today. But, i gots 1 request... in the real story add some NaruIno! plz! ok well ciao

Some deep emotional evaluation. One of the better "deep" fics of today. But, i gots 1 request... in the real story add some NaruIno! plz! ok well ciao
8/26/2007 c1 suzako
very interesting! I love NaruSaku and I can't wait to read the 'final product' =D
very interesting! I love NaruSaku and I can't wait to read the 'final product' =D
8/13/2007 c1 Plus-44
that was honestly one of teh best pieces of fanfic i have ever read. that was just too good, all of it.
great job, i hope the actual story turns out even better, and good luck
that was honestly one of teh best pieces of fanfic i have ever read. that was just too good, all of it.
great job, i hope the actual story turns out even better, and good luck
8/10/2007 c1
3An Antidote
This was good, really good. If my writing beat yours then i would have offered being your beta reader. It is sad, very that naruto loves Sakura so much but she doesn't love him back. She should have shut her mouth than lie to him that she loved him. Ugh, very insensitive Sakura.
But, making love with Naruto wouldn't that affect her future relationship with Sasuke. What if she got pregnant with Naruto's baby? And how could Sasuke take her of having been sleeping with his rival on his leave? Would Sasuke even survive the battle against his big bro?
I loved your oneshot. Man, i should go sleep now, busy day tomorrow. I hope to read more of your stories. until next time.

This was good, really good. If my writing beat yours then i would have offered being your beta reader. It is sad, very that naruto loves Sakura so much but she doesn't love him back. She should have shut her mouth than lie to him that she loved him. Ugh, very insensitive Sakura.
But, making love with Naruto wouldn't that affect her future relationship with Sasuke. What if she got pregnant with Naruto's baby? And how could Sasuke take her of having been sleeping with his rival on his leave? Would Sasuke even survive the battle against his big bro?
I loved your oneshot. Man, i should go sleep now, busy day tomorrow. I hope to read more of your stories. until next time.
8/8/2007 c1
2Judicium
I'd be glad to beta read for you! If this was only an exert then I cant wait to read the whole thing. just reply to this though my profile and let me know the details!

I'd be glad to beta read for you! If this was only an exert then I cant wait to read the whole thing. just reply to this though my profile and let me know the details!
8/7/2007 c1
5LucianUzumaki
I really liked this story and I am looking forward to future chapters. I really liked how you made Naruto understand the coplicated relationship between him, Sakura, and Sauske. Very well written.

I really liked this story and I am looking forward to future chapters. I really liked how you made Naruto understand the coplicated relationship between him, Sakura, and Sauske. Very well written.
8/7/2007 c1 Tyan
Good story ^_^ If you want I can be your beta-reader, if you haven't already found one. :)
Good story ^_^ If you want I can be your beta-reader, if you haven't already found one. :)
8/6/2007 c1
10evryluvsmisty
I really enjoyed it. It was very nice. I can't wait to see the whole story. :) Till then. Bbye

I really enjoyed it. It was very nice. I can't wait to see the whole story. :) Till then. Bbye