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9/11/2010 c6 26sandystar2k
that was really good, sorry again for saying it suck
9/11/2010 c5 sandystar2k
this story is actually really good, happy for them finding each other
9/11/2010 c3 sandystar2k
you know what before, and i'm very sorry for it now, i said booo. But i was very wrong for saying it, and now that i've read your story more, i seem to like it, so yeah, and again sorry for saying it suck
8/15/2010 c1 sandystar2k
5/29/2008 c1 Rikki Tikki Tavi
Wow, this is a really good story and it has a few intriguing ideas. However, the only thing that threw me off - and it's probably only because I'm a stickler for detail and work as an attorney's assistant - was the fact that it's written that she's underage even though she's 20, and in most of the known world 20 is legally an adult. WAY over being an adult actually. Underage clubbing, prostitution or drug use is usually categorized as someone under the age of 18.

Anyway, this is a really good story. Kepp up the good work!
3/12/2008 c6 11it's simply me
This is actually quite a gripping story. I'm quite hooked, so update soon.
1/4/2008 c6 41Super Reader
Oh that's ok. I don't mind a very short chapter. 2 and 5 getting married, I have to say that I do mind. Oh well. Update when you can.
10/11/2007 c5 Stephanie120
Abby as a prositute?I'm not so sure about that...But great story anyway.:)
8/31/2007 c5 Super Reader
aww... wait. So I guess this means they weren't decommissioned? Or what? If they were that would explain why they never contacted each other... hmm... I guess the story isn't over yet...
8/30/2007 c4 15Cyrix
Pretty good story, very original also. Poor Abby... Yeah it would be cool if the rest of them came in the story also. I am guessing nigel will save Abby and they will fall in love and stuff lol
8/27/2007 c3 5GoldenFlither
I have never seen a romance between a police officer and a convict. Pretty original stuff. Keep going, because I'm loving this.
8/7/2007 c2 GoldenFlither
Holy moly! Abby in jail? This is a great story idea. I can't wait to read more.
8/7/2007 c1 9Mushawuff
XD i know, impossible. But this storyline just popped into my head when i was reading the paper, so...yeah. O.o
8/6/2007 c1 41Super Reader
*giving u a funny look* Abby working as a hooker? no way no how. sorry it is your story so I'll shut up and let you continue...
8/6/2007 c1 314
I find this storyline rather interesting. Are you going to add the rest of the group? That would be great if you did.

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