for Heaven and Hell3/10/2021 c1 297699767660
wait Mai really made a lot of sense there. Her predictions of after-life Naru are somehow scarily too specific and accurate xD
how were you just out here creating the best NaruMai fics
wait Mai really made a lot of sense there. Her predictions of after-life Naru are somehow scarily too specific and accurate xD
how were you just out here creating the best NaruMai fics
3/9/2015 c1 
130Snavej
Normally I hate super short pieces because they are short but this was brilliant!
130SnavejNormally I hate super short pieces because they are short but this was brilliant!
1/25/2015 c1 63kaitothegreat
omgggg I am so done with this fic
I laughed so hard till it hurts about Naru coming back and haunting as a ghost, this is just so good!
Thanks for writing this!
63kaitothegreatomgggg I am so done with this fic
I laughed so hard till it hurts about Naru coming back and haunting as a ghost, this is just so good!
Thanks for writing this!
10/21/2013 c1 Yuki Kusanagi
I found this one story cute and funny.
Poor innocent sweet Mai, the only one girl alive can make the great Prof Oliver Davis bickering back and forth about some nonsense.
Great story.
I found this one story cute and funny.
Poor innocent sweet Mai, the only one girl alive can make the great Prof Oliver Davis bickering back and forth about some nonsense.
Great story.
3/28/2009 c1 77xxkoffeexx
Aw. Naru can be subtly sweet when it comes to Mai. I wish her all the luck. Great writing by the way.
77xxkoffeexxAw. Naru can be subtly sweet when it comes to Mai. I wish her all the luck. Great writing by the way.
3/20/2009 c1 14OrigamiGirl
Aw...That was super cute and I loved the playful banter between Naru and Mai!
14OrigamiGirlAw...That was super cute and I loved the playful banter between Naru and Mai!
7/18/2008 c1 Heise
"Take a nap or something useful like that ..."
ROFLMAO. That was really cute. -^^- I like Mai's interpretations of Ghost Naru. xD
"Take a nap or something useful like that ..."
ROFLMAO. That was really cute. -^^- I like Mai's interpretations of Ghost Naru. xD
4/2/2008 c1 21OwlAway
^_^ that is lovely! I love this lots o^_^o that last sentence is so... darned cute :P
21OwlAway^_^ that is lovely! I love this lots o^_^o that last sentence is so... darned cute :P