for Love at First Sight3/20/2013 c8 Guest
Amazing love it jack is cute
Amazing love it jack is cute
2/7/2011 c12 
2Lumonox
Whoaaa.. I can't wait till the next chapter! Keep up the good work.
There are some minor mistakes in the spelling. But it is really good.
Please update soon.
2LumonoxWhoaaa.. I can't wait till the next chapter! Keep up the good work.
There are some minor mistakes in the spelling. But it is really good.
Please update soon.
1/13/2011 c4 Greenies
This is an excelent chapter i love how you made the family so familysh ;)
This is an excelent chapter i love how you made the family so familysh ;)
1/11/2011 c12 11TheLogicalDreamer
wow whats going on with Mel? cant wait to find out this is a great story good job update soon plez:)
11TheLogicalDreamerwow whats going on with Mel? cant wait to find out this is a great story good job update soon plez:)
1/6/2011 c12 1RachelWay
i reeeaaally like this and i think its funny how now jack's gunna try and toy with her..im so evil ;) but this is awsome and i hope u update soon! im an eager reader! :)
1RachelWayi reeeaaally like this and i think its funny how now jack's gunna try and toy with her..im so evil ;) but this is awsome and i hope u update soon! im an eager reader! :)
1/6/2011 c12 39Florencia7
OH What will happen now? So much confusion going on! I hope neither Jack nor Melanie won't get hurt... too much lol
Great chapter! :)
39Florencia7OH What will happen now? So much confusion going on! I hope neither Jack nor Melanie won't get hurt... too much lol
Great chapter! :)
12/24/2010 c11 1Garapa
Not sure what I think of the story. I like it and yet this whatever it is that's happening is very strange.
1GarapaNot sure what I think of the story. I like it and yet this whatever it is that's happening is very strange.
12/24/2010 c11 Garapa
Not sure what I think of the story. I like it and yet this whatever it is that's happening is very strange.
Not sure what I think of the story. I like it and yet this whatever it is that's happening is very strange.