3/5/2013 c1 62mamika
hah, that was nice. I really liked that little 'ice cube' comment. so..cool XD
good story.
hah, that was nice. I really liked that little 'ice cube' comment. so..cool XD
good story.
5/30/2010 c1 21FaiofSeresu
loved it! Fai, who comes from an ice world, is cold! while kuro, who comes from a hot world, is not. how strange! love the kurofai in this. it's just to cute.
loved it! Fai, who comes from an ice world, is cold! while kuro, who comes from a hot world, is not. how strange! love the kurofai in this. it's just to cute.
11/4/2009 c1 32Lithium Amaranth
Fai It's okay! I understand your pain! My room is the coldest one in the house in winter and the hottest one in summer :P
Fai It's okay! I understand your pain! My room is the coldest one in the house in winter and the hottest one in summer :P
9/19/2008 c1 41Kelpie the Thundergod
aah, I love this^^...everytime I read it, it makes me happy^^...and the short towel scene always gets me XD
aah, I love this^^...everytime I read it, it makes me happy^^...and the short towel scene always gets me XD
9/10/2007 c1 50Nillen
‘daddy was mean’
‘that he didn’t love mommy’
‘he could care less if mommy froze to death’
Hahaha!Fay is so cute!I love him so much until I wanna hug him tight!*ran to hug fay but Kuro-daddy kicked me away* Wuuaa!I wanna read more!Look!Now I'm complaining your one shot stories is too short while your series stories is too long!T.T
Anyway,I like the story so much!Great job!
‘daddy was mean’
‘that he didn’t love mommy’
‘he could care less if mommy froze to death’
Hahaha!Fay is so cute!I love him so much until I wanna hug him tight!*ran to hug fay but Kuro-daddy kicked me away* Wuuaa!I wanna read more!Look!Now I'm complaining your one shot stories is too short while your series stories is too long!T.T
Anyway,I like the story so much!Great job!
8/9/2007 c1 2Akino-Kinoha
Cute! Ah, I also know that situation (though here nearly noone has AC, in vacation or the car there always is XD)...
" Kurogane gave him the ‘dad’ look, folding his arms and leaning against the doorframe." XD I can so picture that ^_^
Cute! Ah, I also know that situation (though here nearly noone has AC, in vacation or the car there always is XD)...
" Kurogane gave him the ‘dad’ look, folding his arms and leaning against the doorframe." XD I can so picture that ^_^
8/8/2007 c1 nolongeractivechan
Lol, thats exactly how the weather is here. I go out between 5am and 8 am when its cool, but today it was all muggy and sticky! Eugh! The upstairs of my house is boiling, the basement moderate and the main floor cool,lol. Damn kids went and got a new ac for the living room and forgot about my poor little hangout the basement. Oh, snap! Im rambling again. Lol, but awesome story as always! It was super cute, haha,Kuro-fart. Ive never heard/seen someone use it, its awesome :D
Lol, thats exactly how the weather is here. I go out between 5am and 8 am when its cool, but today it was all muggy and sticky! Eugh! The upstairs of my house is boiling, the basement moderate and the main floor cool,lol. Damn kids went and got a new ac for the living room and forgot about my poor little hangout the basement. Oh, snap! Im rambling again. Lol, but awesome story as always! It was super cute, haha,Kuro-fart. Ive never heard/seen someone use it, its awesome :D
8/8/2007 c1 25sky tulips
Wow! That was brilliant. So heartwarming and amusing. Hee.
"Kuro-chi without a shirt on sitting willingly in front of me? And I can’t do anything to provoke him?"
That was great.
So were the names. They were just, so fabulous. Hahaha.
But the end was so pretty. Very fluffy and joyful.
This deserves to be favourite-ed.
Wow! That was brilliant. So heartwarming and amusing. Hee.
"Kuro-chi without a shirt on sitting willingly in front of me? And I can’t do anything to provoke him?"
That was great.
So were the names. They were just, so fabulous. Hahaha.
But the end was so pretty. Very fluffy and joyful.
This deserves to be favourite-ed.
8/8/2007 c1 DayDreamer64
Aww cute! I feel Fai's pain! Right now I'm shivering-yes shivering because of the AC and it's waay to hot outside and with this fever I've got going on-it's making it very hard to breath normally with a stuffy nose. Great fic though! And very cute! ^-^
Aww cute! I feel Fai's pain! Right now I'm shivering-yes shivering because of the AC and it's waay to hot outside and with this fever I've got going on-it's making it very hard to breath normally with a stuffy nose. Great fic though! And very cute! ^-^