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2/24/2020 c1 Athena2019
This was beautifully written, so realistic and so emotional. I love all your work, but this is truly one of my favorites.
11/12/2018 c1 Guest
As someone who thinks no one has yet managed to write a decent intimate scene, I can say that you do this quite well. I only have issue with your Remus in this story. Aside from the fact that I think he's celibate, I can't imagine him acting the way he does here, namely, being so forward. He lacks that gentleness and hesitation I firmly believe he has, especially if,as you point out, he hasn't had any recent experience in this area. I found things he said to be rather inappropriate. I also an't imagine him simply being intimate based on atraction. He does admit he loves her, but I'll never believe he would make love first and this after. It should be the other way around. I think Remus respects women, and that intimacy and relationships are very special to him, because he believes he can't have them.
9/2/2018 c1 Guest
It’s really good. The only thing is that the changes back and forth in time would be easier to follow with a break marker (have no idea if those have an actual name).
5/30/2018 c1 5ImATrooper
this is beautiful! amazing job, you really captured the morning after feeling, and i love the flashback portions!
5/22/2018 c1 17GeekLoveFan
So I’ve been lurking, reading, and favoriting, but not reviewing *dodges tomatoes* For this, I apologize. I just felt compelled to leave one for this piece, because it was simply oh-so-rich and gorgeous. I actually felt my heart speed up at points, and if that’s not a compliment, then I don’t know what is. This story also contains what could very well be in the running for my favorite line ever written in a piece of fanficThey’d held each other against the people and the world who would deny them this.”
1/30/2017 c1 3Dirigible0Plums
Loved this one-shot! Great job at playing with the past and present, I think it's part of what made it such a great fic. Lovely writing.
12/10/2016 c1 Guest
awwwww
7/21/2016 c1 pottermind
love it, nicely written!
5/20/2015 c1 13creativesm75
Nice .
1/12/2014 c1 6The Unnamed Avatar
That's hilarious that he's been up the entire time! Too bad Tonks didn't get to try and move it lower to see his reaction!
Like the rest of your stories that I've read, this was done beautifully. It was definitely more intimate, but held more emotion and passion than lust. The transitions were a tad confusing, but after a few of them, it clears up.
You did a fantastic job with this!
7/26/2013 c1 8TonksfortheMemories
Ahhh perfect! Love them. Thanks for posting 3
1/27/2012 c1 Kitten Kisses
M rated fics are usually not my thing, but I had to read this one, obviously because you wrote it and I like your style. It seems this 'fic unfortunately lost any and all scene breaks, so it's a little rough to stumble through, but I found my way through it without too much difficulty. Then again, I'm an FFN expert when it comes to things like that. Hah.

That said, I love how intimate this is without being descriptive. Not that descriptive is bad, mind, but as a reader I like seeing and experiencing the more emotional side of things. And you definitely delivered with this.

I personally think for Remus he'd prefer to have Tonks looking just as she naturally is. I think he does like the pink hair but at the same time, I think her being her natural self around him at such an intimate time would really give it all a lot more meaning for the both of them. I almost feel that she hides a bit behind her bright hair and interesting clothing choices...not that I blame her, because I would too, if I had her ability.

[saying silently that this is her exposed, this is her raw, this is her as she is and it's, well, really, really scary so if he just wouldn't mind saying or doing the right thing?] This was just the perfect line, my favorite in the entire 'fic. That being exposed like that is scary to her is just...completely relateable. I almost said "understandable" but then I realized how many other people have been through the same thing. I definitely have- without giving too much away, I was extremely touched by friends who didn't give two whits about my teeth. They're gone now (they were that bad), and the problem is just as big as ever. Like Tonks I think I could see how being seen just totally raw like that would be frightening as hell. Just kind of blows your mind when a bloke sees you for who you are in all your "natural beauty" and still tells you you're beautiful.

Thanks for this lovely 'fic. It was a treat.
9/8/2011 c1 Lucy diamond
WOW. Amazing story. I love it!
8/28/2011 c1 7I Luv R-T
*sigh* that was just..amazing :)
4/24/2011 c1 2missmetric
Absolutely lovely. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Pretty sexy too, if I do say so myself. :3
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