
8/23/2007 c2
6LeFrenchMartini
OKAY WOAH!
Umm, my character name is Shay as well.
wtf,
you updated this today, did you steal my character & MY name?
I`m not accusing, but taht is kindof odd. yeah it is.
You`re story is great & everything, but would you mind changing the name,
she sortof is my character.
` & Shayy ;

OKAY WOAH!
Umm, my character name is Shay as well.
wtf,
you updated this today, did you steal my character & MY name?
I`m not accusing, but taht is kindof odd. yeah it is.
You`re story is great & everything, but would you mind changing the name,
she sortof is my character.
` & Shayy ;
8/16/2007 c1
2bballqueen15
really love your story. I can't wait to hear more. It has great potential. really creative. maybe add a little more detail though. other than that, i can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep it up!

really love your story. I can't wait to hear more. It has great potential. really creative. maybe add a little more detail though. other than that, i can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep it up!