
8/31/2007 c1
17Miriamimus
Very sweet, very well written and very different from my own version of events (him telling her about the Horcrux). Well done!

Very sweet, very well written and very different from my own version of events (him telling her about the Horcrux). Well done!
8/11/2007 c1
14dev.gg
I absolutely loved the last line of this piece; I felt it was really strong, and just to me, really fantastic. I really enjoyed this story, it was really well written, and I thought it was great that they both finally talked about how they’d both been feeling.
Great job on this piece, keep it up!
-angel6

I absolutely loved the last line of this piece; I felt it was really strong, and just to me, really fantastic. I really enjoyed this story, it was really well written, and I thought it was great that they both finally talked about how they’d both been feeling.
Great job on this piece, keep it up!
-angel6
8/11/2007 c1
61Piper Elizabeth
That was great! The emotions were so real and I could totaly picture this happening. Great job!

That was great! The emotions were so real and I could totaly picture this happening. Great job!