for Whirlwind2/19/2010 c11 Apeopher Columbus
I don't get why you think this story is so bad...it's really damn good, seriously.
There are a bunch of people who like it, including me. I haven't actually read this in forever, but I know I liked it when I did, and it was damn good.
I can't force you to update this (else I would, lol), but I can ask that you do so, at least for the reviewers. You've got a nice thing going on here. Don't let it die.
I don't get why you think this story is so bad...it's really damn good, seriously.
There are a bunch of people who like it, including me. I haven't actually read this in forever, but I know I liked it when I did, and it was damn good.
I can't force you to update this (else I would, lol), but I can ask that you do so, at least for the reviewers. You've got a nice thing going on here. Don't let it die.
11/11/2007 c11 
2Kinar Shadeslayer
Yay the stories continued! after years and years of endless waiting! My wall is covered with knuckle marks but ... yay!
I'm not on WoW yet . . NO!
I'm borderline insane . . SOB
Great story, Great characters, now start to WRITE!
2Kinar ShadeslayerYay the stories continued! after years and years of endless waiting! My wall is covered with knuckle marks but ... yay!
I'm not on WoW yet . . NO!
I'm borderline insane . . SOB
Great story, Great characters, now start to WRITE!
11/5/2007 c11 17Kyn
I find it ironic that even though Markhov says he's "the bad guy", he still views the orcs as the evil ones. He finds it suiting that he revisit his pains upon them, and does not realize that he's become the very thing he hates. He's not just "The bad guy" in Lorkhan's story- he's "The bad guy" in his own.
And you quoted shakespear and several songs :P
17KynI find it ironic that even though Markhov says he's "the bad guy", he still views the orcs as the evil ones. He finds it suiting that he revisit his pains upon them, and does not realize that he's become the very thing he hates. He's not just "The bad guy" in Lorkhan's story- he's "The bad guy" in his own.
And you quoted shakespear and several songs :P
11/5/2007 c11 4AskTalon
Damn good story. I dont see why you didnt like the way the first chapters were written, I found them enjoyable.
4AskTalonDamn good story. I dont see why you didnt like the way the first chapters were written, I found them enjoyable.
11/5/2007 c11 Neoscottie
Like I said before: GAH he just won't die! DX Plot device, Neo, plot device.
... You killed off Obereth. D: /emocuts But he;s such a nice guy, sacrificing himself and all and AWW his family! Yay. :D
But no, don't leave us there! What vile, evil things do Markov and Voidwrath have planned for our heroes? ONLY TIME WILL TELL.
*prods author with a stick*
AndifthisgetsputonhiatusI'. ;D
Like I said before: GAH he just won't die! DX Plot device, Neo, plot device.
... You killed off Obereth. D: /emocuts But he;s such a nice guy, sacrificing himself and all and AWW his family! Yay. :D
But no, don't leave us there! What vile, evil things do Markov and Voidwrath have planned for our heroes? ONLY TIME WILL TELL.
*prods author with a stick*
AndifthisgetsputonhiatusI'. ;D
10/13/2007 c10 Kyn
Gah! That bears an uncanny similarity to what happened to Markov's loved one. I wonder if he'll realize it?
On the other hand, the sword said that Lorkhan had slain its former master... It might have been lying, but then why show Lorkhan Markov's past? It indicates that the sword wanted Lorkhan to pity him. Generally you get people to pity one another when you want them to help one another.
I wonder if the blade is part of Markov's soul, hense why he cannot die while its unbroken?
Gah! That bears an uncanny similarity to what happened to Markov's loved one. I wonder if he'll realize it?
On the other hand, the sword said that Lorkhan had slain its former master... It might have been lying, but then why show Lorkhan Markov's past? It indicates that the sword wanted Lorkhan to pity him. Generally you get people to pity one another when you want them to help one another.
I wonder if the blade is part of Markov's soul, hense why he cannot die while its unbroken?
10/13/2007 c10 Neoscottie
Good lord, he just won't die, will he? D8 Rhana, no!
Aww, I feel kinda sorry for Markov now. :(
Great chapter! Cliffhanger - you're so mean. :P I'll be waiting for the next one!
Good lord, he just won't die, will he? D8 Rhana, no!
Aww, I feel kinda sorry for Markov now. :(
Great chapter! Cliffhanger - you're so mean. :P I'll be waiting for the next one!
10/9/2007 c9 Kyn
No!
Ride4Ruin, I'd have to say that Markov was my absolute favorite character ;) You are exquisite at making bad guys- expecially believable ones. I've really liked your fic because it displayed both sides of the tale as being equally justified. Even people weilding artifacts like the "Black Blade of Sin" aren't /total/ monsters.
But Markhov, no!
No!
Ride4Ruin, I'd have to say that Markov was my absolute favorite character ;) You are exquisite at making bad guys- expecially believable ones. I've really liked your fic because it displayed both sides of the tale as being equally justified. Even people weilding artifacts like the "Black Blade of Sin" aren't /total/ monsters.
But Markhov, no!
10/8/2007 c9 2Fadzly B.R
Tell you what, give me a number and i'll pass it to the nearest publisher. lol, this has got to be one of the most enthralling reads ive seen.
pros and cons be damned, nobody's perfect. Great job done here it reminds me much about Gemmell and Raymond E.Feist but you have still a long way to go so keep it up.
and keep me posted for more reads!
2Fadzly B.RTell you what, give me a number and i'll pass it to the nearest publisher. lol, this has got to be one of the most enthralling reads ive seen.
pros and cons be damned, nobody's perfect. Great job done here it reminds me much about Gemmell and Raymond E.Feist but you have still a long way to go so keep it up.
and keep me posted for more reads!
10/7/2007 c3 2k+Hawki
Hmm, I thought Theoden said it would be a "sore" day. Guess that's what comes from watching without subtitles.
Anyway, I guess this is getting monotomous, but pretty much ditto for this chapter concerning others in a sense. Nice fight scenes but perhaps rushed in context. Can't help but feel a sense of deja vu with chapter 2 in a sense.
2k+HawkiHmm, I thought Theoden said it would be a "sore" day. Guess that's what comes from watching without subtitles.
Anyway, I guess this is getting monotomous, but pretty much ditto for this chapter concerning others in a sense. Nice fight scenes but perhaps rushed in context. Can't help but feel a sense of deja vu with chapter 2 in a sense.
10/7/2007 c2 Hawki
Um, the issue of a quote from Starship Troopers being in a fantasy story aside, the chapter once again had its set of pros and cons. Pros were the depiction of the fight scene which flowed well, although was perhaps vague in its depiction of the full impact of the infiltration. The cons were really around writing style.
Lorkhan is the one usually centered around this, sentences being akin to 'Lorkhan did this, Lorkhan thought that', etc., which can get monotomous. At times it would be good to replace "Lorkhan" with "he" or with terms like "orc", "Mag'har", "warrior", etc.
Anyway, that's just me. Good job.
Um, the issue of a quote from Starship Troopers being in a fantasy story aside, the chapter once again had its set of pros and cons. Pros were the depiction of the fight scene which flowed well, although was perhaps vague in its depiction of the full impact of the infiltration. The cons were really around writing style.
Lorkhan is the one usually centered around this, sentences being akin to 'Lorkhan did this, Lorkhan thought that', etc., which can get monotomous. At times it would be good to replace "Lorkhan" with "he" or with terms like "orc", "Mag'har", "warrior", etc.
Anyway, that's just me. Good job.