
11/28/2002 c2 Dragonbreath1
Well, that's okay, i suppose. It seemed a little rushed. Probably would have been better if you had given it some sort of plot. I give it 5 outta 10.
Well, that's okay, i suppose. It seemed a little rushed. Probably would have been better if you had given it some sort of plot. I give it 5 outta 10.
9/5/2002 c2 hoshi
yes you should continue thanks for the review.bye
yes you should continue thanks for the review.bye
4/27/2002 c2
3odango-atama66
it is pretty good but could do with a bit of work but it is interesting! i want to read more so write please and if anyone flames you about it tell me and i will give the loser a peice of my mind!
keep writing
alex ;-D

it is pretty good but could do with a bit of work but it is interesting! i want to read more so write please and if anyone flames you about it tell me and i will give the loser a peice of my mind!
keep writing
alex ;-D
9/2/2001 c1
3Silens Unus
UMM I liked the part where Mamo-baka died, but it is a little confusing. Though you should continue, I like to be confused.

UMM I liked the part where Mamo-baka died, but it is a little confusing. Though you should continue, I like to be confused.
8/10/2001 c1
22Kyia Star
if you don't continue, you don't see Heero for three months and you and Vegita will spend two days together in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber. other than that, i think this is funny!

if you don't continue, you don't see Heero for three months and you and Vegita will spend two days together in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber. other than that, i think this is funny!
7/26/2001 c1 babyblueyes too lazy to sign in
I love it! I'm glad that you're writting again! I just can't wait for some more to come out!
~~~~Amber
I love it! I'm glad that you're writting again! I just can't wait for some more to come out!
~~~~Amber