for AvPvR Aliens Vs Predator Vs Rayne4/29/2021 c1 PappyOldGuy
Intriguing and (well enough written in my opinion) a very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Intriguing and (well enough written in my opinion) a very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.
Thank you so much for sharing.
12/28/2020 c1 Kyr
Great story. Thank you for sharing.
Great story. Thank you for sharing.
4/17/2020 c1 
1Majerus
I... huh.
No way I'd have seen this pairing... you made it work.
Nice job and a fun story!
1MajerusI... huh.
No way I'd have seen this pairing... you made it work.
Nice job and a fun story!
5/5/2013 c1 BlueEyedBrigadier
Damn...Jayne's level of awesome just got jacked massively! Fighting off Aliens and Predators by his lonesome definitely earns him infinite Big Damn Hero points, though I am surprised there was no attempts by Facehuggers to make him a walking embyo ;P
Hope Simon can patch Mal up, though he chose to mess with the Alien corpse is beyond me :S
Damn...Jayne's level of awesome just got jacked massively! Fighting off Aliens and Predators by his lonesome definitely earns him infinite Big Damn Hero points, though I am surprised there was no attempts by Facehuggers to make him a walking embyo ;P
Hope Simon can patch Mal up, though he chose to mess with the Alien corpse is beyond me :S
9/3/2010 c1 Shadowcatisajerk
Very nice crossover. I don't usually go for crossover fiction because it seems forced, but this one really works. I like Jayne and River working together and would love to see Mal tied to that chair (gives me all sorts of ideas).
Very nice crossover. I don't usually go for crossover fiction because it seems forced, but this one really works. I like Jayne and River working together and would love to see Mal tied to that chair (gives me all sorts of ideas).