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4/25/2015 c1 19Smiling Seshat
There are some punctuation troubles, but the story as a whole is good.
12/21/2013 c1 mavic chen
This is not a review for this. Sorry. I want to say something about that Doctor Who/Star Trek fic, Of Gods. It got things wrong. Was Davros telling the truth? He's a villain. And his old standby, as it puts it, was first uttered in 2006, Doctor Who's 43rd year.
9/17/2013 c1 3Aubrey Bruxton
...wow. You were right about the grammar, but that didn't detract from the story. I honestly wasn't sure where you were going with it but the story as a whole was very moving. You should write more often, I would be happy to beta read anything you might want to post.
3/13/2011 c1 6Chaoslover43
I like the whole plot, but as you said the dialogue is pretty shaky. Other than that, great story ;P
8/13/2008 c1 23freddyburn
Hey. You were kind enough to review my story, so here I am. The stories plot is good, the dialogue is a little shaky, but I make so many mistakes in my own stories I can overlook that. From reading this story I would say you should try your hand at another story.
8/16/2007 c1 hp fan
Ok the end was wierd when Harry cries but the rest of it was pretty good!

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