for Choices of the Heart9/5/2017 c2 IdkWhatToNameMe
SHIT ITS LONG ASS ETERNITY but it's good
SHIT ITS LONG ASS ETERNITY but it's good
6/7/2013 c6 Review guy
I would never say this but it was.…BRILLIANT!
I would never say this but it was.…BRILLIANT!
5/14/2012 c2 
1loverofganon
Ok so i like the characters, but how did malon see them kissing? It's good but a bit confusing when you switch perspectives with characters. I like the tough girl malon.
1loverofganonOk so i like the characters, but how did malon see them kissing? It's good but a bit confusing when you switch perspectives with characters. I like the tough girl malon.
4/2/2011 c10 Garshming
PLEASE write the sequel! You've tantalized my interest with the teaser and now i beg of you to continue. I love this story, however creepy it might be, the concept of those three as a team has much potential.
PLEASE write the sequel! You've tantalized my interest with the teaser and now i beg of you to continue. I love this story, however creepy it might be, the concept of those three as a team has much potential.
6/27/2010 c9 28Cimar of Turalis WildeHopps
I have been pleasently surprised with this story. I was hoping I could find a good story on ff.net tonight, and it seems like I have. The plotline works very well, and moves at a fairly even clip, allowing the reader to envelop themselves within the story. The characters are done well, although Zelda seems to cry a bit much, but otherwise a fun read. These stories are always fun to read, and I'm glad that you decided to write this one.
Rating: 8.5/10 Not the best work I've seen, but for the length, definatly one of the better stories I have read. Good job.
28Cimar of Turalis WildeHoppsI have been pleasently surprised with this story. I was hoping I could find a good story on ff.net tonight, and it seems like I have. The plotline works very well, and moves at a fairly even clip, allowing the reader to envelop themselves within the story. The characters are done well, although Zelda seems to cry a bit much, but otherwise a fun read. These stories are always fun to read, and I'm glad that you decided to write this one.
Rating: 8.5/10 Not the best work I've seen, but for the length, definatly one of the better stories I have read. Good job.
4/11/2010 c10 birdboy385
well this whole story was just beautiful. I spent most of yesterday reading this story taking only 5 minute breaks between chapters. I couldn't stop reading.
well this whole story was just beautiful. I spent most of yesterday reading this story taking only 5 minute breaks between chapters. I couldn't stop reading.
7/9/2009 c9 random
aw cute ending
aw cute ending
6/6/2008 c4 28Shuiro Ecstacy
Whoa, this story is intense. I love it so far; you're obviously a dedicated Zelda player, lol. I can tell that you pay close attention to the game. I like the characteristics and attitudes you've created in everyone; you've made Saria a very motherly girl, even though she's far younger than Link. You've given Link the classic teenage boy kind of attitude. I'm absolutely in love with Zelda's hyperness, lol. She's so naive, and yet she performs the best sophisticated act I've ever seen. Brilliant. Malon has the typical teenage girl thing going on, but she's got a sense of mystery and secretiveness to her, as well as a very sensitive feature.
Very nicely done! I have to stop reading for now (wow, your chapters are long! Hehe...), but I most definitely look forward to reading the rest of it!
-Scarlet
28Shuiro EcstacyWhoa, this story is intense. I love it so far; you're obviously a dedicated Zelda player, lol. I can tell that you pay close attention to the game. I like the characteristics and attitudes you've created in everyone; you've made Saria a very motherly girl, even though she's far younger than Link. You've given Link the classic teenage boy kind of attitude. I'm absolutely in love with Zelda's hyperness, lol. She's so naive, and yet she performs the best sophisticated act I've ever seen. Brilliant. Malon has the typical teenage girl thing going on, but she's got a sense of mystery and secretiveness to her, as well as a very sensitive feature.
Very nicely done! I have to stop reading for now (wow, your chapters are long! Hehe...), but I most definitely look forward to reading the rest of it!
-Scarlet
5/29/2008 c9 4Truth Questor
Huzzah, it's finally resolved! :) Sad, but better than it could have been.
How are Zelda and Malon going to be best friends AND enemies, I wonder...? ;)
And the correct spelling is: 'frantically'.
4Truth QuestorHuzzah, it's finally resolved! :) Sad, but better than it could have been.
How are Zelda and Malon going to be best friends AND enemies, I wonder...? ;)
And the correct spelling is: 'frantically'.
5/25/2008 c9 Hyrule Homie
poor link he has two girls fighting over him. great story! Its to bad that Ren had to die in the end though, i liked him
poor link he has two girls fighting over him. great story! Its to bad that Ren had to die in the end though, i liked him
12/25/2007 c8 27PhiraLovesLoki
Cute story! It's a little too fluffy for my tastes, but that's a personal thing, so no worries. I like your twist, and I do feel as if you've given readers enough clues to figure it out for themselves.
I'm excited to see how this turns out, especially since many Malon-Link stories these days are written with such poor grammar and spelling that I can't read them. But yours is readable AND enjoyable, which is totally awesome.
I did feel that Farore was a bit of a (literal) deus/a ex machina, but this is your story, and I respect that.
27PhiraLovesLokiCute story! It's a little too fluffy for my tastes, but that's a personal thing, so no worries. I like your twist, and I do feel as if you've given readers enough clues to figure it out for themselves.
I'm excited to see how this turns out, especially since many Malon-Link stories these days are written with such poor grammar and spelling that I can't read them. But yours is readable AND enjoyable, which is totally awesome.
I did feel that Farore was a bit of a (literal) deus/a ex machina, but this is your story, and I respect that.
12/19/2007 c8 4Truth Questor
I just shouted "Oh, no!" aloud. I was suspicious of him for a while, but lately I've been hoping I was wrong... That's so sad!
Finally, Malon and Zelda get to talk. I feel bad for both of them...
I'm glad you got this chapter up. I think it was fine. Keep going! I'm cheering you on! :)
4Truth QuestorI just shouted "Oh, no!" aloud. I was suspicious of him for a while, but lately I've been hoping I was wrong... That's so sad!
Finally, Malon and Zelda get to talk. I feel bad for both of them...
I'm glad you got this chapter up. I think it was fine. Keep going! I'm cheering you on! :)
10/29/2007 c7 Truth Questor
Wow. Wow, wow, wow. This, I think, has been the best and most well-written chapter yet.
~Being rescued by a knight in shining armor was reserved for fair princesses locked away in a tower, not for coarse, redheaded farm girls.~
Aww... That sentence was sweet and sad-I love it!
Your descriptions of dressed-up Zelda and of Farore encouraging Link were great. And of course, take another cheer for excellent spelling and punctuation!
Things are really picking up now; hope to see more soon. Keep writing! :)
Wow. Wow, wow, wow. This, I think, has been the best and most well-written chapter yet.
~Being rescued by a knight in shining armor was reserved for fair princesses locked away in a tower, not for coarse, redheaded farm girls.~
Aww... That sentence was sweet and sad-I love it!
Your descriptions of dressed-up Zelda and of Farore encouraging Link were great. And of course, take another cheer for excellent spelling and punctuation!
Things are really picking up now; hope to see more soon. Keep writing! :)
10/16/2007 c6 Truth Questor
Good to see an update. I know, I really need to update, too. I've been kind of suspicious of Ren for a while, but this chapter is making me re-think about him... Oh, boy... Not good! Poor Link.
Good to see an update. I know, I really need to update, too. I've been kind of suspicious of Ren for a while, but this chapter is making me re-think about him... Oh, boy... Not good! Poor Link.