
6/18/2008 c1
7gaaraluver63
Great story!It's sad, yet romantic and fluffy. Though I'm not the biggest fan of lemon, this story is still good.
Make sure you check your grammar though, you had a couple mistakes here and there.
Still, it's a great story!

Great story!It's sad, yet romantic and fluffy. Though I'm not the biggest fan of lemon, this story is still good.
Make sure you check your grammar though, you had a couple mistakes here and there.
Still, it's a great story!
9/4/2007 c1 zutara101
GREAT, that was so fucking great!
GREAT, that was so fucking great!
8/23/2007 c1
7bluestarlove
That was sort of strange (with the lemon). My cousin read it also and all he did was sit there in excited hyped up awe. Strange reactions come from the strange

That was sort of strange (with the lemon). My cousin read it also and all he did was sit there in excited hyped up awe. Strange reactions come from the strange
8/17/2007 c1 Lah-chan
I love it!
poor miroku in begin but now he will be father! great.
good fic and lemon (smile miroku-like)
I love it!
poor miroku in begin but now he will be father! great.
good fic and lemon (smile miroku-like)