for Tangled in Death2/7/2017 c1 Guest
Terrible idea having more than just kyuubi's so called reishi inside naruto. Makes a lot wonder what you were thinking. It kinda makes the story more predictable and annoying. So cya. I'm not interested in reading a story I know will end with one of my correct predictions. By that I guessed chapter two and three got it right now I dislike your profile.
Terrible idea having more than just kyuubi's so called reishi inside naruto. Makes a lot wonder what you were thinking. It kinda makes the story more predictable and annoying. So cya. I'm not interested in reading a story I know will end with one of my correct predictions. By that I guessed chapter two and three got it right now I dislike your profile.
7/12/2016 c1 
45Black' Victor Cachat
Really hoping you do continue this, your work for Nanao's Zanpakuto is much more interesting than what they did in canon
45Black' Victor CachatReally hoping you do continue this, your work for Nanao's Zanpakuto is much more interesting than what they did in canon
7/10/2016 c9 Black' Victor Cachat
Nice scenes where they achieve Bankai...and Naruto worrying about a hole in his mind
Good work with Gin, playing away and then ruthlessly cutting off Naruto from taking the advantage. Even better with Nanao attacking Gin right off
Slight typo that you have two Kido 63
Really liked the whole scene with Naruto unleashing Bankai, from his emotions, Gin's reaction, the description, everything!
At first I thought you meant Kurama appeared, thanks for clarifying it is Komamura
Really hope you get back into this!
Nice scenes where they achieve Bankai...and Naruto worrying about a hole in his mind
Good work with Gin, playing away and then ruthlessly cutting off Naruto from taking the advantage. Even better with Nanao attacking Gin right off
Slight typo that you have two Kido 63
Really liked the whole scene with Naruto unleashing Bankai, from his emotions, Gin's reaction, the description, everything!
At first I thought you meant Kurama appeared, thanks for clarifying it is Komamura
Really hope you get back into this!
7/10/2016 c8 Black' Victor Cachat
Very good explanation from Naruto on why he went easy on Naruto, and nice rematch. Also good point that Ichigo having actual Shinigami powers should have affected Rukia's sentence
LOL jealous Nanao
Very good explanation from Naruto on why he went easy on Naruto, and nice rematch. Also good point that Ichigo having actual Shinigami powers should have affected Rukia's sentence
LOL jealous Nanao
7/10/2016 c7 Black' Victor Cachat
Thanks for clarifying on why the cover for Urahara's exile was justifiable, implying that he meant for that brand of gigai to harm shinigami sent to earth
Mentioning the low life expectancy of Shingami in service of their duty also makes it easier to forgive them for the abuses of power and how arrogant they can be. They have volunteered for a very serious and dangerous life after all, so the self-sacrifice should be respected. In the manga it was only mentioned in the beginning, and then the excesses seemed to take over
Thanks for clarifying on why the cover for Urahara's exile was justifiable, implying that he meant for that brand of gigai to harm shinigami sent to earth
Mentioning the low life expectancy of Shingami in service of their duty also makes it easier to forgive them for the abuses of power and how arrogant they can be. They have volunteered for a very serious and dangerous life after all, so the self-sacrifice should be respected. In the manga it was only mentioned in the beginning, and then the excesses seemed to take over
7/10/2016 c6 Black' Victor Cachat
Your work on bankai is as insightful as what you did with shikai, particularly with Nano's, and again I wish we saw more of your related work with this in the manga, even if Naruto's is a bit silly (although still very amusing! X-D )
Good point on how weird it should have been for the shinigami that the protocol bound 46 suddenly started breaking laws and traditions over Rukia
Your work on bankai is as insightful as what you did with shikai, particularly with Nano's, and again I wish we saw more of your related work with this in the manga, even if Naruto's is a bit silly (although still very amusing! X-D )
Good point on how weird it should have been for the shinigami that the protocol bound 46 suddenly started breaking laws and traditions over Rukia
7/10/2016 c4 Black' Victor Cachat
LOL yes I can see Naruto fighting Kenpachi just to push himself as far as he can, with everyone thinking that is crazy
I think your work with shikai is my favourite thus far. Not only did you show the progression, but also show how similar they were and helping each other like that. Ichigo should talk to Zangetsu more often if only for advice like Naruto does here
LOL yes I can see Naruto fighting Kenpachi just to push himself as far as he can, with everyone thinking that is crazy
I think your work with shikai is my favourite thus far. Not only did you show the progression, but also show how similar they were and helping each other like that. Ichigo should talk to Zangetsu more often if only for advice like Naruto does here
7/5/2016 c3 Black' Victor Cachat
Nice touch that against Kenpachi Naruto thinks he is doing badly, but is in fact actually doing surprisingly well. Also LOL at trying to prevent the rise of a 2nd Kenpachi Zaraki
Nice touch that against Kenpachi Naruto thinks he is doing badly, but is in fact actually doing surprisingly well. Also LOL at trying to prevent the rise of a 2nd Kenpachi Zaraki
4/25/2016 c9 Guest
Ahh! This is so good! Please update soon! Also, you put two different chants for bakudo 63.
Ahh! This is so good! Please update soon! Also, you put two different chants for bakudo 63.
4/19/2016 c2 Guest
You think Renji has a sucky Shikai? Ikaku is much worse off.
You think Renji has a sucky Shikai? Ikaku is much worse off.
7/22/2014 c6 42x09katerina
Criticism: There isn't much detail. I mean, I like it, and it's good, there are just some blank spaces.
Comment: Yay Nanao and Naruto! And, is it just me, or will the canon characters be introduced soon? Ooh.
42x09katerinaCriticism: There isn't much detail. I mean, I like it, and it's good, there are just some blank spaces.
Comment: Yay Nanao and Naruto! And, is it just me, or will the canon characters be introduced soon? Ooh.